Take Me Now My Love

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Take me now and hold me tight In your arms with all your might, I feel the world just turning With all this love for you carrying With all my dreams put together, With this love I can now figure, In the sky I see stars showers, Hear your voice in the air whisper Take my hands and touch me, Without you my life is empty, Feel this love surround us In all its timeless, sweetness. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,18,2014

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Jack Ellison

Date: 11/19/2014 7:56:00 AM

Oh oh oh! I would be sooo happy to oblige you my dear sweet loving friend! But these Soup mail hugs are all I can manage! What a sweetheart of a heart you possess! Love, Jack XXXX

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2014 11:54:00 PM

Hi Jack my dear friend! Thank you so much for stopping by again! :) xxx D.

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/19/2014 7:37:00 AM

D, I always like the pictures you post in the notes section. The pictures you select and post complement your poems so very well. They are truly worth a thousand words or more!! True shared love does indeed have the timeless dimension to it, sprinkled with the perfect amount of sweetness. Another FAV here from me. And the "7" is understood. You say so much so meaningfully -- and quite powerfully so -- in a modicum of words. Best Always and Spill Ink!! Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2014 11:57:00 PM

You're so sweet and kind my dear friend Gary. Thank you so much for your visit and all your kind comments! Much appreciated by me always.Will stop to see you very soon. :) xxxx D.