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Take Me Home,Mom

"No word is sufficient to describe a mother..forgive me mom for this try" Ten months and ten days carrying me in your womb.... another sweet home warmth of a nest nourishing me every way.... you learnt me how to fly so pain in life Mom scorching sunrays all over.... take me home again © 2011 kash poet ================== Dedicated to Maa

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/17/2012 9:44:00 PM

To put the robin back in the egg is a difficult task...I do like the tho't of it tho'! Smashing dedication to your mum, Kash. We had a great mother's day here at my house. My daughters bo't me a ten man tent and we set it up in my living room and hung out for the evening!...It was great times! Congrats on your win. Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2012 2:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Any Dedication" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/17/2012 12:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/16/2012 2:29:00 PM

Congrats on your 1st place win, Kash. Excellent write. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph

Joseph May

Date: 5/16/2012 5:45:00 AM

congrats on your win Kash..

Joseph May

Date: 5/16/2012 5:44:00 AM

congrats on your win Kash..

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/16/2012 5:32:00 AM

Congratulations dear poet,splendid write....

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 5/16/2012 5:32:00 AM

Congratulations dear poet,splendid write....

David Williams

Date: 5/16/2012 1:19:00 AM

Kash huge congrats on your win..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/15/2012 11:50:00 PM

Kash, congratulations with your wonderful entry. Tank you for supporting my contest. Every entry was lovely in it's own way and deep for the occasion. Good night, ;-) PD

David Williams

Date: 8/29/2011 1:14:00 PM

hey kash congrats on your win David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/29/2011 7:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Mother" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/28/2011 11:42:00 PM

Nice tribute to your Mom. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/28/2011 11:13:00 PM

Congrats Kash on your amazing win with this outstanding write on Mother.. my friend.. luv this composition.. a wonderful piece..luv..

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/28/2011 11:05:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Kash. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/11/2011 2:44:00 PM

Very beautiful. R.M.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/2/2011 7:43:00 AM

An excellent entry for Francine's contest Kash and a brilliant piece on the nurturing Mom connected to u luv... special sentiments here ..good luck in the contest luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2011 11:48:00 AM

a sweet write, best wishes on the contest, enjoyed this one,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/26/2011 9:33:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..She loved you so that you want to return home again...Great honor to your mother..Enjoyed reading...Good luck in the contest ..Thanks for stopping by and leaving encouraging comments on my work..Sara

Judy Konos

Date: 4/26/2011 8:02:00 AM

Very nice indeed...

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/25/2011 10:54:00 PM

A sweet write Kash and a lovely approach to the contest.. Good luck for Francine's contest ;) Wilma

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/25/2011 7:57:00 PM

thank you for entering my contest Kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2011 3:35:00 PM

gosh, I am stunned to hear you were over ten months in the womb. Must have been a "womb with a view" hahaha. Do you get the joke? This is very nice. showing your great affection for your mother. I think we all desire the comfort of "going home again."

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/25/2011 1:03:00 PM

Kash, there are many times I wish I could return to my own mother's womb for the comfort and security it provided. This is a very touching entry for Francine's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/25/2011 12:49:00 PM

oh yes, kashi! this one charms me all the way... enchanting! winning luck to you.. come visit me?? :) hugggs, nette