Kash Poet Poet Senryu

Take Me Home,Mom

"No word is sufficient to describe a mother..forgive me mom for this try"




Ten months and ten days
carrying me in your womb....
another sweet home

warmth of a nest
nourishing me every way....
you learnt me how to fly

so pain in life Mom
scorching sunrays all over....
take me home again



© 2011 kash poet
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Dedicated  to Maa

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Gwendolen Song May 17, 2012 at 9:44 PM To put the robin back in the egg is a difficult task...I do like the tho't of it tho'! Smashing dedication to your mum, Kash. We had a great mother's day here at my house. My daughters bo't me a ten man tent and we set it up in my living room and hung out for the evening!...It was great times! Congrats on your win. Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown May 17, 2012 at 2:25 PM Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Any Dedication" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick May 17, 2012 at 12:37 PM Congrats on your win..Sara

Ralph Taylor May 16, 2012 at 2:29 PM Congrats on your 1st place win, Kash. Excellent write. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph

Joseph May May 16, 2012 at 5:45 AM congrats on your win Kash..

Joseph May May 16, 2012 at 5:44 AM congrats on your win Kash..

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet May 16, 2012 at 5:32 AM Congratulations dear poet,splendid write....

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet May 16, 2012 at 5:32 AM Congratulations dear poet,splendid write....

David Williams May 16, 2012 at 1:19 AM Kash huge congrats on your win..David

Poet Destroyer A May 15, 2012 at 11:50 PM Kash, congratulations with your wonderful entry. Tank you for supporting my contest. Every entry was lovely in it's own way and deep for the occasion. Good night, ;-) PD

David Williams August 29, 2011 at 1:14 PM hey kash congrats on your win David

Carol Sunshine Brown August 29, 2011 at 7:24 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Mother" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage August 28, 2011 at 11:42 PM Nice tribute to your Mom. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 28, 2011 at 11:13 PM Congrats Kash on your amazing win with this outstanding write on Mother.. my friend.. luv this composition.. a wonderful piece..luv..

Ralph Taylor August 28, 2011 at 11:05 PM Congrats on your win, Kash. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Matt Hunt May 11, 2011 at 2:44 PM Very beautiful. R.M.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 2, 2011 at 7:43 AM An excellent entry for Francine's contest Kash and a brilliant piece on the nurturing Mom connected to u luv... special sentiments here ..good luck in the contest luv..

Poet Destroyer A April 26, 2011 at 11:48 AM a sweet write, best wishes on the contest, enjoyed this one,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick April 26, 2011 at 9:33 AM Reads like a winner to me..She loved you so that you want to return home again...Great honor to your mother..Enjoyed reading...Good luck in the contest ..Thanks for stopping by and leaving encouraging comments on my work..Sara

Judy Konos April 26, 2011 at 8:02 AM Very nice indeed...

Wilma Neels April 25, 2011 at 10:54 PM A sweet write Kash and a lovely approach to the contest.. Good luck for Francine's contest ;) Wilma

Francine Roberts April 25, 2011 at 7:57 PM thank you for entering my contest Kashinath

Andrea Dietrich April 25, 2011 at 3:35 PM gosh, I am stunned to hear you were over ten months in the womb. Must have been a "womb with a view" hahaha. Do you get the joke? This is very nice. showing your great affection for your mother. I think we all desire the comfort of "going home again."

Carolyn Devonshire April 25, 2011 at 1:03 PM Kash, there are many times I wish I could return to my own mother's womb for the comfort and security it provided. This is a very touching entry for Francine's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud April 25, 2011 at 12:49 PM oh yes, kashi! this one charms me all the way... enchanting! winning luck to you.. come visit me?? :) hugggs, nette

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