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Take Me Home,Mom

"No word is sufficient to describe a mother..forgive me mom for this try"




Ten months and ten days
carrying me in your womb....
another sweet home

warmth of a nest
nourishing me every way....
you learnt me how to fly

so pain in life Mom
scorching sunrays all over....
take me home again



© 2011 kash poet
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Dedicated  to Maa

Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2011

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Gwendolen Song Date: 5/17/2012 9:44:00 PM To put the robin back in the egg is a difficult task...I do like the tho't of it tho'! Smashing dedication to your mum, Kash. We had a great mother's day here at my house. My daughters bo't me a ten man tent and we set it up in my living room and hung out for the evening!...It was great times! Congrats on your win. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/17/2012 2:25:00 PM Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Any Dedication" contest Kash. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/17/2012 12:37:00 PM Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 5/16/2012 2:29:00 PM Congrats on your 1st place win, Kash. Excellent write. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 5/16/2012 5:45:00 AM congrats on your win Kash.. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 5/16/2012 5:44:00 AM congrats on your win Kash.. Login to Reply

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet Date: 5/16/2012 5:32:00 AM Congratulations dear poet,splendid write.... Login to Reply

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet Date: 5/16/2012 5:32:00 AM Congratulations dear poet,splendid write.... Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 5/16/2012 1:19:00 AM Kash huge congrats on your win..David Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/15/2012 11:50:00 PM Kash, congratulations with your wonderful entry. Tank you for supporting my contest. Every entry was lovely in it's own way and deep for the occasion. Good night, ;-) PD Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 8/29/2011 1:14:00 PM hey kash congrats on your win David Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/29/2011 7:24:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Mother" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 8/28/2011 11:42:00 PM Nice tribute to your Mom. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/28/2011 11:13:00 PM Congrats Kash on your amazing win with this outstanding write on Mother.. my friend.. luv this composition.. a wonderful piece..luv.. Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 8/28/2011 11:05:00 PM Congrats on your win, Kash. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph Login to Reply

Matt Hunt Date: 5/11/2011 2:44:00 PM Very beautiful. R.M. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/2/2011 7:43:00 AM An excellent entry for Francine's contest Kash and a brilliant piece on the nurturing Mom connected to u luv... special sentiments here ..good luck in the contest luv.. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/26/2011 11:48:00 AM a sweet write, best wishes on the contest, enjoyed this one,..p.d. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/26/2011 9:33:00 AM Reads like a winner to me..She loved you so that you want to return home again...Great honor to your mother..Enjoyed reading...Good luck in the contest ..Thanks for stopping by and leaving encouraging comments on my work..Sara Login to Reply

Judy Konos Date: 4/26/2011 8:02:00 AM Very nice indeed... Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 4/25/2011 10:54:00 PM A sweet write Kash and a lovely approach to the contest.. Good luck for Francine's contest ;) Wilma Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 4/25/2011 7:57:00 PM thank you for entering my contest Kashinath Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/25/2011 3:35:00 PM gosh, I am stunned to hear you were over ten months in the womb. Must have been a "womb with a view" hahaha. Do you get the joke? This is very nice. showing your great affection for your mother. I think we all desire the comfort of "going home again." Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/25/2011 1:03:00 PM Kash, there are many times I wish I could return to my own mother's womb for the comfort and security it provided. This is a very touching entry for Francine's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/25/2011 12:49:00 PM oh yes, kashi! this one charms me all the way... enchanting! winning luck to you.. come visit me?? :) hugggs, nette Login to Reply

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