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Take Me Away

Take me away I need to feel to heal Past pains Passion cures Your allure Makes it all go away Please...Stay... Take me away Say my name Pant it Breathe it in Exhale it Hold on to me Let this be Our finest hour Lose me in your power Make everything fade Everything but you... And this This never ending kiss Bliss... Pure bliss No heaven or hell You've cast the spell No yesteday or tomorrow Now... now... now Ahhhh.... Take me away Let me heal Let me feel Let me reel from pleasure My treasure Take me away Where there's only you and me and eternity In our lips Baby, take me... Take me A~w~a~y~~~~~~

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Paige Hind

Date: 8/1/2024 12:25:00 PM

Ah, taken away....<3 you write with a lot of heart

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 7/12/2024 1:53:00 PM

Beautifully depicted emotions! The glory of love and abandon! The most precious moments of life- for some lucky ones it is a lifetime!

John Lawless

Date: 7/8/2024 4:33:00 AM

BE RIGHT BACK....gotta go take a cold shower....WOW.....Love clothed in the passion of healing.....Gotta FAVE this one and maybe whisper it to my wife tonight....

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/8/2024 7:21:00 AM

I'm sure she'll be delighted! ;) Honestly... that feeling like nothing else matters... what can compare. I think it's one of the few times we know what it means to abandon ourselves to love and be loved as we desire... thus tasting completeness. One of God's greatest gifts.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2024 2:24:00 AM

Pure passion exudes from this romantic poem to which no man can remain passive, dear Eileen! When a woman offers herself and asks for more, who could deny her!! ~ Warm regards and hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/8/2024 7:23:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely comment. I think the rest of a man's true manliness is whether he can make a woman want more and more of him. To be loved with abandon... who wouldn't love to experience that...

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/7/2024 1:23:00 PM

eileen - you are the queen of romantic poetry on the soup and this poem is proof that you haven't lost your touch at all!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/7/2024 9:34:00 PM

Thanks, dear. Kind of you. There's healing when you're with the one you love.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/7/2024 1:15:00 PM

I love the power of words , "make it go away", "No yesteday or tomorrow Now... now... now"... I miss those words, Baby, take me... Take me A~w~a~y.. Many blessings my friend

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/7/2024 9:34:00 PM

What a sweet comment. Thanks, Eve. I'm glad it resonated with you. Big hugs