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Take me again… Take me… for I am nothing without you Tease my desires with your fingers a’ wander Upon quivering flesh, shivering needs cry All of this is yours, deeply offered, rhythmically played Bite me… little marks to revisit at dawn My chest, my thighs, my soul pleads Drinking of this passion, thirsting for more Peering up at you, wings flutter within my heart Use me… as I lay here, hands lifting Slow circles encompass warm breaths Moaning eclipses bring edged light from outer visions Cupped of fevered frenzy and firm decisions Ride me… I am your stallion, unsaddled, unbridled Grip my mane, tear at my shoulders, guide me to that valley Where whispering willows sway in mahogany waves Finding the depths of your heightened encampment Scream me… my name on your lips excites When the comet appears and streaks the sky Flashing sparks meld between us shimmering, erupting in a cosmic flow, lava escapes in hot pulsating streams Take me again… for I am nothing without you Good night Soupers

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Date: 10/22/2019 4:15:00 AM
Ok ok I read one more! Lmao! I do remember this one very well! Lol me and ps ladies were lovin it more than we should have I think and wow I remember why! So glad I requested it!;)
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Date: 1/15/2019 3:40:00 PM
Oh reading the comments below...You were taken so it seems... :)..with all the whispers ,passion and screams...Sizzling from the grill :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/15/2019 3:44:00 PM
Hi there my friend. Thank you Charmaine, yes it seems that was the case but sadly I wasn't here to take part in the fun.
Date: 11/26/2018 11:03:00 PM
Good write, Chris, congratulations on your win.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/27/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thank you Eve. :)
Date: 11/26/2018 1:33:00 PM
So seductive, loved the stallion stanza the best, congratulations on your win!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 1:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Michelle. I am thrilled you liked it.
Date: 11/26/2018 4:31:00 AM
Wow, hot and very well written, congratulations on your win!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 9:29:00 AM
Thank you so very much Tania.
Date: 11/26/2018 2:48:00 AM
This is wonderful, Chris, and so deserving! I love to write passionate, sensual stuff like this, but I posted one early-on and someone told me it was not allowed, nor anything approaching "mature or adult content" ... I am happy to see that it IS, and that this placed so highly. When done with class and imagination, it is much more sexy than anything graphic, I believe, (though I'm probably more metaphorical). Congrats - great stuff! :-)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 9:29:00 AM
Thanks so very much Gregory. I know what they say the rules are but I kind of scatter and disguise the meaning of my sensual stuff and let others decide what it is about. : )
Date: 11/26/2018 12:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on your "Sexy Contest" poem, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 9:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much Anne Lise. :)
Date: 11/25/2018 11:20:00 PM
Hot Stuff, Chris. Congrats on your richly deserved podium win.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 9:27:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 11/19/2018 1:03:00 PM
A stunner, Chris! ... Gotta go take a cold shower now. Whew! Poetry on fire! :) gw
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Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2018 1:28:00 PM
From reading below, that shower is getting awfully crowded. :)
Date: 11/18/2018 7:43:00 PM
You have expressed the kind of honeymoon love/lust that every woman should at least, once in their life, experience superbly! All I can say is I can relate this to my mate Chris!!! ; )
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Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2018 8:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie for always being so kind to me. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 11/18/2018 2:50:00 PM
A superb erotic little vision there. Nicely done.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2018 8:05:00 AM
Thanks so very much LT. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 11/18/2018 11:36:00 AM
So sensual Chris, especially how you open each stanza. See you after your weekend, my friend :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2018 8:05:00 AM
Thanks so very much Darren for your kind words. Your friendship is so appreciated.
Date: 11/17/2018 2:26:00 PM
Wow wow wow! lol Now this is a keeper! I'm so jealous!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Carole. No need to be jealous, just enjoy the moment. :) I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 11/17/2018 10:07:00 AM
Hi Chris, this is about as good as it gets as far as erotic, sensuous poetry goes. This is definitely cold shower time. An amazing write my friend. Strong images come forth from powerful poetry. A Fave. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thanks so very much Mike. I am happy you enjoyed this one. Enjoy that cold shower. : )
Date: 11/17/2018 12:53:00 AM
I'm here, I think - let me sit a minute. So, WOW is an understatement. First: ()()###%%%%%%%~~~~~!!()(), second: that's some of the best erotica I've ever read, wonder how many double meanings others picked up, but not for too long because, third: I need to find Tim - don't need the soap
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Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2018 8:11:00 AM
I am not sure what to say or even where to start on this chain of comments except to say thank you my friend for your comments and for lighting up soup this weekend.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 11/18/2018 6:47:00 PM
I want to hear the joke, but ladies (yes, even after our behavior on this page I say 'ladies"), I'm pretty sure this isn't the right 'place' for the joke, we've already 'violated' so much of all things Chris on the page.
Date: 11/16/2018 9:09:00 PM
Still haven't read the poem. Read the girls again; maybe this poem should come with soap. (I'm having a great time)
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Date: 11/16/2018 9:08:00 PM
I clicked on this because I live in the gutter and liked the title. After reading Nina and Brandy, I'm almost afraid to actually read the poem that so rocked them both. I'll come back when Tim is home - seems I may need to attack him???? Really, be back - he'll be here soon. What in the world, Chris? Should u start writing those Harlequin paperbacks? Won't forget, can't
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 11/17/2018 6:11:00 PM
My apologies - I definitely knew it was you but apparently my brain failed to fully engage. What's strange is that every time I get a name wrong, it has the correct number of letters. Anyway, my error was Chris' fault.
Date: 11/16/2018 8:44:00 PM
Your one hot tamale Chris lol...excellent write my friend...you got my sib breathing fire overtime lol...love & hot tamales...^WW^
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Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 11/16/2018 7:31:00 PM
Oh my, Chris, amazing..
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Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thank you so very much Eve. :)