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Home » Poems » Niall Fulham » Take Me

Take Me

Take me in your arms Whisk me frisk me now Make my hair stand I’m at your command Falling for romantic hand Soaring euphoria high Orchestra of moving band Surround sound tip toe In the grove with every move You play with me so smooth Pleasure zone to the bone I put you on pedestal throne

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Debbie Duncan
Date: 8/14/2017 9:39:00 PM
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I like it, nice writing. Should I say typing :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/15/2017 2:09:00 AM
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Hi Debbie , thanks for comment:)))hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/12/2017 3:16:00 PM
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- Love the last line, Niall - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/12/2017 3:48:00 PM
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Hi Anne-Lise ,,you too have a good one ,, thanks for comment ::)))hugs
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/10/2017 12:13:00 PM
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The ladies are swooning over this one.... sizzle
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/10/2017 4:26:00 PM
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Hi Tim , hehe 'swooning' maybe I might be reading too many of your romantic writes my friend ,, thanks for comment ::))))
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/9/2017 11:39:00 PM
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Hi Niall, I agree with Akkina , love the last two lines. Awesome write!
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/10/2017 1:37:00 AM
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Hi Sunan , thank you for comment ,, makes me all happy ::))))happy Hugs
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/9/2017 10:16:00 PM
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You romantic superman you. Lol! I especially love those two last lines. Fabulously done, Niall :) hugs :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/10/2017 1:35:00 AM
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Hi Akkina , thank you ,,, tip of the iceberg a little flavor of me :::))))) hugs
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/9/2017 5:48:00 PM
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Yeppers a fate devoutly to be wished for sigh. Oh well back to your poem very stirring.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/9/2017 5:54:00 PM
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Hi Patricia , lol thanks for comment glad you enjoyed :)))hugs

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