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Take It E-Sea

The night sea makes the stars ‘my private universe’ And yet, one feels the multitudes gazing the same way Kneading thoughts of multiverses staring in reverse Enchantment on daunting dimensions making headway Inside the rarer paths of hardened real, the surreal takes on the wild waves that once tore at mettle to fray electronic virtuality’s so subpar surpassed always by experiences neuronal Everlastingly firing away, the near, now far Atomic energy spin-drives all ~ elemental (9/12/2020: '93 Sea Ray 330 DA; Sac Marina)

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/5/2020 3:30:00 PM

Very creative and uniquely expressed, Susan - moonlight on water is a truly mesmerizing view. Congratulations on your win.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 10/5/2020 4:17:00 PM

thanks Sam :)

John Watt

Date: 10/4/2020 10:38:00 PM

Beautiful writing, Susan. There is something magical and mystical about the night sea; whether sailing on it, swimming in it, or watching the moon rise over it. Wonderfully real and surreal. Congrats ~ John

Susan Woodrow
Date: 10/5/2020 8:36:00 AM

thank you John... the sea is magical alright Congrats to you too :)

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 10/4/2020 4:35:00 PM

Susan, I love this!! - First time seeing it. Very cool thought provoking topic. Quite well written, rhyme seemlessly works. Great last line, it has awesome impact. Congratulations!! This should have been higher, it's a credit to you.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 10/4/2020 5:03:00 PM

thank you Sigrid...I liked your number one winner of course, cos it had the ocean Congrats to you :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/4/2020 1:41:00 PM

I like this a lot Susan - very nice! Congratulations! Linda

Susan Woodrow
Date: 10/4/2020 4:00:00 PM

glad you do, Linda...thank you :)

Julia Ward

Date: 10/4/2020 3:31:00 AM

A well thought out poem for my contest called "My Private Universe".

Susan Woodrow
Date: 10/4/2020 5:00:00 AM

Thanks for the inspiration:)