Take Heed, Love

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We cannot mimic the cry of a loon. Nor capture the light of the moon.
We'll never reach a distant star. Both too high and much too far.
Yet we search, both hither and yon, Seeking that magical bond.
Love is fragile all too often. It melts a heart and makes it soften.
There's no escape when we're caught in the trap set by the heart.
It doesn't matter who we are, when love becomes a tug of war.
There's no way of putting back, the yolk of an egg that's been cracked.
No band aid has ever healed a wound. It merely covers, but too soon,
The cut, shielded and protected, is exposed revealing it's been infected.
Toxins of the most poisonous kind take away joy and peace of mind.
It's sad, yes, but it's also true, knowing there's nothing more to do.
The road to love can be quite long, and longer yet when it goes wrong.
There are hazards, twists, and turns. Flaming words leave lasting burns.
Depressing are all these thoughts. Morbid ramblings of a wounded heart.
Time heals all wounds, so they say. It's true. Time took my pains away.

These next words I speak to you, Love:

Take heed to my words of scorn. Listen to me, Love, it's you I warn.
Don't bother trying to build a defense. For you there is no recompense.
No payment for the hurt you caused. And no compensation for your flaws.
Embittered and torn, I am no more. But don't knock again upon my door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/6/2015 11:19:00 AM
"The road to love can be quite long, and longer yet when it goes wrong." Oh, these words struck a nerve with me and made me tear up. Beautiful, wise words you have here, Lin.
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Date: 11/6/2015 11:03:00 AM
Awwwww........what wisdom is there in your lines, Lin. "Flaming words leave lasting burns." So true...So very true. Those last four lines....I guess "It is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all" doesn't always hold true. Powerful write.
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Date: 11/6/2015 11:08:00 AM
wow Eileen.. your quote is spot on with the one I just posted about Wordsworth..lol what did he know? It's NOT always better to have loved and lost (totally agree with you) . . .Thank you so much for liking this one.
Date: 11/6/2015 9:12:00 AM
what an ocean of emotion you got there:) I love it! +7
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Date: 11/6/2015 9:17:00 AM
You're expression is a poem in itself, Elis.. Thank you so much for the compliment and the 7. ;)
Date: 11/6/2015 7:46:00 AM
Lin, I really enjoyed reading these raw and powerful emotions. I agree with your skillful pen love can bring much heartache. When gone it time to move on:-)Alexis 7
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Date: 11/6/2015 9:15:00 AM
Thanks, Alexis. Moving on is the only thing to do...one of those 'easier said then done' cliché's. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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