Take Care of Him My Lord

I hold my little new born child  
who is born in a hospital
in a town where tumbleweeds roll mild   
the Cancer has been staged, its terminal 
incurable and running wild 

every hair on his head is counted 
every toe accounted for 
I think about all the strength surmounted
for this jewel in my pinafore 
and hear his loud sharp cry, undaunted;  

rage of angels rap at my chest door    
as I fade away into his heart beat,  
the lion comes for his feeding chore;
Oh those eyes of finest wheat,   
how they draw me in aside the shore  

and move me to a place of Grace.      
The curtain closes and I weep    
inside my ventricle, his memorized face   
I pray to God my soul to keep,  
then glide away, to another place.    


September 6, 2021 

Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Contest Name	Quintain (Sicilian)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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September 7, 2021 at 2:04 PM
WoW! What a deeply touching and heart wrenching piece this is. No one should ever have to bury a child. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
Y. Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 12:52 PM
WoW! Mystic, It was hard to read the story. Tears formed in my eyes as read this heart-tugging write. I felt the heartache, and in each line. Best wishes in the contest-Alexis
Buehler Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 11:22 AM
Your tale of joy and sorrow touched my heart. Your rich imagery is captivating. Blessings, Evelyn
Buhagiar Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 9:17 AM
The pain! It never goes away. Can't wish to die. There is my new born asking for me. How sad to lose your new born babe. Will he remember me?
Rose  Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Bless your empath heart Victor, no greater loss for a mom then leaving life behind and dying, have a great Saturday, love xo
Michael Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 9:00 AM
I'll never quite understand what it feels like to be a mother...but I can feel the pain here...Well done
Rose  Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 9:09 AM
Thanks dear friend, I have two, someone once said " when you have a child, its the last time you walk with your heart inside. so true..
Skelly Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Bittersweet and heartfelt Vie..Delice
Rose  Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 9:08 AM
thank you dear Delice, bless your heart :)
Pandit Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 6:49 AM
This is so heartfelt, poignant write. Words of prayer emanate mother's love in all its beauty. So well written, Vienna!
Rose  Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 9:08 AM
Thank you Vijay, God bless you :)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 6:13 AM
so sad and such a beautiful write. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
Rose  Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 6:26 AM
Thank you Gina.
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