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Take a stroll

Take a stroll Take a gentle stroll along the winding path, Have a look at the surroundings, Wether it's a forest, rolling hills or a park. So many beautiful places to see, Which direction shall I take? Where do I start? Nature is such a wonderful thing, The gentle, flowing stream glistening, As the sun shines brightly, The birds sound so wonderful, as I am listening. Calm and free, So beautiful as they fly around, Then so gently they glide, And singing to the other birds they found. Look at the beautiful bluebells, Surrounding all the trees, The colour looks stunning, As they sway in the gentle breeze. Take a deep breath, Inhale the lovely fresh air, And for the rest of the day, Remember that you were there. Have a good day!

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Date: 12/5/2023 7:16:00 AM
Pleasant and a perfect way to start the day. Nicely done Jeanette. :)
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 12/23/2023 11:15:00 AM
Thank you. Glad you liked the poem. Have a good Christmas.
Date: 11/22/2023 7:17:00 PM
Sweet and soothing. Was this for the nature contest?
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 11/26/2023 1:03:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I think I may have entered it into the nature contest. Thank you for your comments, I appreciate your feedback. Hope you are having a good weekend.
Date: 11/20/2023 4:04:00 AM
Yes, I agree, Jeanette, once a person has had a nice walk or just a nice sit on the porch, they can take that in their spirit all day long. I enjoyed reading your post. Thank you for sharing and dropping by my page. Sara K
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 11/22/2023 2:26:00 AM
Hi Sara, yes it is lovely to be outdoors and get some fresh air. Thank you for your comments. Have a good day.
Date: 11/17/2023 2:11:00 PM
Lovely happy poem Jeanette! Debx
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 11/18/2023 3:39:00 AM
Thank you Deb, for your comments. Have a good weekend.
Date: 11/17/2023 12:36:00 PM
Can't beat your 'prescription' for having a great day, Jeanette!
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 11/18/2023 3:38:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments Have a good day
Date: 11/10/2023 2:44:00 PM
I share your love and appreciation for nature, Jeanette. There's so much to see and hear. I love the silence, it's powerful as light itself. I appreciate the images you created and I can see them in my mind's eye. Lovely! enjoy your evening, Sara
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 11/14/2023 12:51:00 AM
Hi Sara. Yes nature is wonderful to see. Thank you for your kind comments. Glad you liked the poem.
Date: 11/10/2023 10:28:00 AM
Nature is always soothing and calming, and we find a healing song for every soul there, if we truly listen. I love the flow of this and how well you’ve written this. Soul warming ending too, sending you light always
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 11/14/2023 12:50:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments. I appreciate your feedback. Yes, nature is calming and healing. Thank you for reading my posts.
Date: 11/10/2023 8:55:00 AM
Hi Jeanette. We are blessed with such a precious planet. Let's make an effort to change our ways and protect it. Tony
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 11/10/2023 9:53:00 AM
Yes I agree,change is needed to protect our planet. Thank you for your comments.
Date: 11/10/2023 3:26:00 AM
Ah, misdirections can be an eventful experience, Jeanette. Thanks for the smile. Aloha, William
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 11/10/2023 9:51:00 AM
Thank you for your comments and for reading my posts.

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