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Tainted Vision

Conditioned since birth by customs, family, society and ego We go about with a clustered mind Complicating our simple life with our thoughts and self-imposed restrictions We don't see a human as human rather we attribute adjectives to them Innumerable adjectives to prove we are better In the process, sinning again and again We believe in all the false love of those around We are often fooled by many daily Despite our hurt emotions we believe others, serve them We don't think of a solution A permanent end to our suffering A state of absolute bliss We think we are the body, while we are soul within Thinking body as us, we lead a strange life Obeying the whims of senses Trying to satisfy our ego Seeking sensual pleasure day in and day out Trying to prove we are right, we are the greatest Trapped in the body, our real self seeks freedom from bondage Since we cannot see it, we refuse to acknowledge its presence We live a false life, a meaningless existence Serving no purpose The skin we are so much attached to dies one day, we get another one All our lifelong hard work and hardship becomes meaningless Until we remove the dust that covers our glasses we cannot live in peace How do we remove the delusion that binds our vision? By reading scriptures, pondering over life, trying to understand it By thinking deeply about the purpose of our existence as against merely existing, copying others By becoming detached from world and attached to God, When a person dies, what dies, What is it that leaves the body and we are declared dead When a organ failure occurs we can replace and remain alive This proves we are not any specific organ With artificial respiration life goes on Then who are we? What happens in death? A deeper introspection reveals that we are not the body, We are that which resides in body and when it leaves we die To see the unseen, unknown, we have to end our thoughts. When we live mindfully, without thoughts We experience opening of chakras within our body Kundalini raises up and we perceive our soul Scriptures state we are a part of God When we believe this with absolute faith We see God everywhere, in everything We experience respect and love surging from within While doing our tasks we feel we are serving God Mind only thinks of God, we experience bliss and are liberated In the end when every method fails Just surrender unto Him. Hand over this body along with soul to Him End your ego, doership, stop worrying Now it becomes the responsibility of God to liberate soul And he does. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Verses from Bhagvad Gita which have influenced this poem : BG 2.22: As a person sheds worn-out garments and wears new ones, likewise, at the time of death, the soul casts off its worn-out body and enters a new one BG 8.5: Those who relinquish the body while remembering Me at the moment of death will come to Me. There is certainly no doubt about this. BG 18.61: The Supreme Lord dwells in the hearts of all living beings, O Arjun. According to their karmas, he directs the wanderings of the souls, who are seated on a machine made of the material energy BG 9.27: Whatever you do, whatever you eat, whatever you offer as oblation to the sacred fire, whatever you bestow as a gift, and whatever austerities you perform, O son of Kunti, do them as an offering to Me(God) BG 9.28: By dedicating all your works to Me(God), you will be freed from the bondage of good and bad results. With your mind attached to Me through renunciation, you will be liberated and will reach Me BG 18.66: Abandon all varieties of dharmas and simply surrender unto me alone. I shall liberate you from all sinful reactions; do not fear 24.06.2021

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Date: 6/25/2021 6:46:00 AM
Great depth. I read your poems. They have a clear touch of Indology. Indian spirituality is reflected beautifully.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 6/25/2021 6:53:00 AM
Thanks for the wonderful comments. Yes a student of Bhagvad Gita. It colours all my writes
Date: 6/24/2021 4:52:00 PM
Deep message, Rama. It is clear that you think a lot about the scriptures and your relationship with God. Well done.
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Date: 6/25/2021 6:52:00 AM
Thanks. Written for seekers contest, qouted references as he is very knowledgeable.
Date: 6/24/2021 11:28:00 AM
How we struggle a life time to liberate our soul, Only to find out that God can do that in one instant. If only we knew how to let go, before we die and not after, much love
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 6/24/2021 11:57:00 AM
Words of wisdom. Looking forward to reading your entry for jaundiced eyes contest. Love you too. Take care, God bless!
Date: 6/24/2021 11:22:00 AM
Rama, your inspiring, deep poem does a wonderful job of showing the distinction between body and soul. This is so beautifully written and moving. Blessings, Evelyn
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Date: 6/24/2021 11:54:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful comments. Take care, God bless!
Date: 6/23/2021 10:01:00 PM
I am overwhelmed by your poem. Thus it becomes a favorite. I have been blessed by the 6th Karmapa of Tibet in the Black Hat Ceremony. I had the opportunity to serve he and his monks, lunch. Of course, RINPOCHE BLESSED the food. I tasted some of the fruits later.Never again food like that,To be with greatness, humility and power was a once in a lifetime experience. Of course other moments in my life were great, too. Nothing equaled the Tibetan experience. . Respectfully, Panagiota .
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 6/24/2021 6:27:00 AM
To taste the divinity......you are lucky. Thanks for comments and special thanks for favourite. God bless!
Date: 6/23/2021 9:01:00 PM
A meaningful uplifting verse. Thought provoking too and I am reading it on my dad's first death anniversary. I feel this is a solace for my weeping soul and I also feel my dad's soul merged with God and blessing us from above... Thank you so much...
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 6/23/2021 9:26:00 PM
So glad I could provide solace to your weeping soul. I strongly believe in what you say. Those who die are always near us, taking care of us and blessing us. It is just that we cannot see. May God bless you with peace. Hope you have a peaceful,calm day ahead. Take care! God bless!
Date: 6/23/2021 6:44:00 PM
You really made me think, Rama. Our lives here is a gift, how we use it is another. I am spoiled here where I live. I have had a husband. I have sons and grandchildren that spoil me. I went to school, worked, had my own business, taught religion to children, was in an organization to help others, but all with the help of God. Without Him I feel non of these would have happen. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/23/2021 9:22:00 PM
So glad I made you think. Business, religious teacher, social service... WoW! If I made such an accomplished person think my joy multiplies manifold. I agree nothing is possible without God. Thanks for your wonderful comments. Have a wonderful day ahead friend
Date: 6/23/2021 2:53:00 PM
Bhagvad Gita really inspired you Rama, a very thought provoking verse full of deep meaning. Tom
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 6/23/2021 9:19:00 PM
Thanks Tom for your appreciation. Have a wonderful day ahead friend
Date: 6/23/2021 2:21:00 PM
A voyage through the physical and metaphysical world having as its starting and finishing line in spirituality. Each of your stanzas could be developed into a poem that could guide one's life. It is not easy for a non-initiate to follow you, my dearest, Rama but to an initiate, it is a delight to read. Blessings.
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Date: 6/23/2021 9:18:00 PM
Thanks for your analytical comments and appreciation. Glad you found it a delight to read. Have a wonderful day ahead friend

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