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Tainted By Ghastly Memory

life expires without signs... his ghost's remnants mirroring lesions of her mournful gaze, tears pour out with unexpected lament: scoundrel of hours raking breath, her nights lost. Broken Wings' Contest: Dust Off A Memory 10/25/2017

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/6/2017 1:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Nette.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/30/2017 10:19:00 AM

Nette, congrats on your win! Hugs Eve

Constance La France

Date: 10/30/2017 9:18:00 AM

Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent write, the pain is just dripping from your words and I know this is your reality right now ~

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/29/2017 6:33:00 PM

So much emotion and pain in so few words, Nette. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Brian Davey

Date: 10/29/2017 12:05:00 PM

OMG This write is freaking amazing Netted! Congratulations on your 1st place finish

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/29/2017 9:17:00 AM

Hi Nette, Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/29/2017 8:55:00 AM

Congrats Nette to win top.Hugs

James Inman

Date: 10/28/2017 8:59:00 AM

Great form Nette. A wonderful use of words, as always but, this, I must say presents a conundrum for me. It appears to be a sad poem about a lost loved one but through your word choices it also seems to be about some one who had very mixed feelings about the deceased, perhaps about a mother and daughter viewing the death of their husband/father. You made me think.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/26/2017 3:03:00 AM

Excellent. Perfectly said. So true. ENjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/25/2017 11:52:00 AM

Perfect! Hugs Rick.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/25/2017 4:02:00 AM

You sure do know how to bring the hairs on the back of my neck to stand straight up my friend! What an excellent and exquisitely written poem Nette! I really enjoyed reading your tremendously well written masterful poem here this morning! Your piece here is written with such imagery that I am in awe of its splendor, what an incredible poem, Great Work!!

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 10/24/2017 6:07:00 PM

This is very real and has memories of my own mother's death. Well written imagery. Best wishes for the contest.