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Tage/Days/Días

Die Tage verlieren sich Im Nebel der Einsamkeit Tautropfen im Wind ------------------------------ Days are being lost In the fog of loneliness Dewdrops in the wind ------------------------------ Los días se pierden En la niebla de soledad Gotas de rocío en el viento

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Daniel Cwiak

Date: 6/9/2010 9:29:00 AM

Wunderbar, Gert! Schreiben mehr!! Dan C

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/7/2010 7:49:00 PM

how did I miss this one, enjoyed and congratulations. a very good job and Senryu,..Sidney leeAnn

Margaret Foster

Date: 6/4/2010 2:06:00 AM

Congratulations, A very nice haiku Gert. well done...Margaret

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/3/2010 10:01:00 PM

Super congrats on your win with this wonderful haiku, Gert :)--each line is a gem---& you're very welcome to my explanations, I enjoyed writing them, haha I love food--have a fun day now! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2010 2:47:00 PM

VERRRY nice!!

Brandee Augustus

Date: 6/3/2010 1:30:00 PM

I love the dreaminess od your first two lines. Very nice! Congratulations on you first place win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/3/2010 1:03:00 PM

I needed to have read this one yesterday for I had a really bad day...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work about his equinox....Sad to met the equal that would be right for us and it not work out....Sara

Ray Dillard

Date: 6/2/2010 9:14:00 PM

I'm impressed by your obvious talent. Congratulations and keep on trucking! RAY

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/2/2010 5:43:00 PM

just beautiful and the display of language impressive. Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/2/2010 5:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your first-place win, Gert! Much deserved recognition for this Gem! Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/2/2010 5:36:00 PM

what a wonderful haiku! congratulations on your win harry

Amy Green

Date: 6/2/2010 3:48:00 PM

This is so beautiful, and TRUE that it is scary. Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2010 3:23:00 PM

Super big congrats Gert on your 1st place win in the haiku You contest with this great write.. u enjoy my friend.. this one is terrific ..do that victory dance now..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Rick Parise

Date: 6/2/2010 2:26:00 PM

congrats on your #1 beautiful piece in my contest ~Rick

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/31/2010 5:06:00 PM

beautiful write, enjoyed reading on this memorial day!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/30/2010 3:44:00 PM

You are so creative and have the capacity to create mood through amazing images, Gert. "Dewdrops in the wind -- the fog of loneliness." Thanks for assuring us that we are not alone when we feel this way. Love, Carolyn

Skat A

Date: 5/30/2010 3:35:00 PM

GREAT PERSPECTIVE, ENJOYED