Tage/Days/Días

Die Tage verlieren sich
Im Nebel der Einsamkeit 
Tautropfen im Wind

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Days are being lost 
In the fog of loneliness  
Dewdrops in the wind

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Los días se pierden 
En la niebla de soledad
Gotas de rocío en el viento

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/9/2010 9:29:00 AM
Wunderbar, Gert! Schreiben mehr!! Dan C
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:49:00 PM
how did I miss this one, enjoyed and congratulations. a very good job and Senryu,..Sidney leeAnn
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Date: 6/4/2010 2:06:00 AM
Congratulations, A very nice haiku Gert. well done...Margaret
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Date: 6/3/2010 10:01:00 PM
Super congrats on your win with this wonderful haiku, Gert :)--each line is a gem---& you're very welcome to my explanations, I enjoyed writing them, haha I love food--have a fun day now! :)
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Date: 6/3/2010 2:47:00 PM
VERRRY nice!!
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Date: 6/3/2010 1:30:00 PM
I love the dreaminess od your first two lines. Very nice! Congratulations on you first place win!
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Date: 6/3/2010 1:03:00 PM
I needed to have read this one yesterday for I had a really bad day...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work about his equinox....Sad to met the equal that would be right for us and it not work out....Sara
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Date: 6/2/2010 9:14:00 PM
I'm impressed by your obvious talent. Congratulations and keep on trucking! RAY
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Date: 6/2/2010 5:43:00 PM
just beautiful and the display of language impressive. Light & Love
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Date: 6/2/2010 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your first-place win, Gert! Much deserved recognition for this Gem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/2/2010 5:36:00 PM
what a wonderful haiku! congratulations on your win harry
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Date: 6/2/2010 3:48:00 PM
This is so beautiful, and TRUE that it is scary. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/2/2010 3:23:00 PM
Super big congrats Gert on your 1st place win in the haiku You contest with this great write.. u enjoy my friend.. this one is terrific ..do that victory dance now..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/31/2010 5:06:00 PM
beautiful write, enjoyed reading on this memorial day!!
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Date: 5/30/2010 3:44:00 PM
You are so creative and have the capacity to create mood through amazing images, Gert. "Dewdrops in the wind -- the fog of loneliness." Thanks for assuring us that we are not alone when we feel this way. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/30/2010 3:35:00 PM
GREAT PERSPECTIVE, ENJOYED
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