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Tadpole Flirts

in the slow river pressed flat against the bank tadpole flirts 4/6/3

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/23/2011 10:05:00 AM
This is adorable-- haha could imagine that tadpole, Tahera :) I love catching tadpoles-- wish you the best in the contest & thanks for all your inspiring comments :) --nikko :)
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Date: 1/22/2011 5:10:00 AM
Tahera, This is so cute, I love it. I can visualise the tadpole flirting, hanging on to the bank of the river, flashing lashes lol.
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:57:00 PM
good luck in Charles' contest
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Date: 1/18/2011 10:38:00 PM
This brings back memories of my childhood, Tahera, awesome Senryu. Harry
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Date: 1/18/2011 1:19:00 PM
What a delightful image you created in your haiku, Tahera! Beautifully done. Thanks for your comments on the octopus poem. I'll never forget that day. Turns out they are VERY smart and I think the octopus was purposely toying with me. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:33:00 AM
very keen sense of observation and interpretation, Tahera
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Date: 1/18/2011 5:45:00 AM
Simply sweet and cute Tahera my dear friend.. such wonderful imagery of the little tadpole flirting.. good luck in the contest.. with luv..
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Date: 1/18/2011 5:38:00 AM
Nicely written - interesting choice of words, good luck
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Date: 1/18/2011 2:27:00 AM
oh, i like the phrasing and flirting here, tahera! lots of winning luck in the vontest! :) nette
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Date: 1/17/2011 9:33:00 PM
How interesting this is, Tahera!!
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