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System Solar

System Solar Stars inside your heart can’t see or breathe When you take them out and toss them to the sky Mix them with moons, planets and thoughts of cosmic dreams Pepper them with meteors and comets Salt it all with sands of time designed Particles large and small come into being to be freed Moved on by vast speeds, weights and waves of light That quietly takes shape. They take their place Allowed to nearly bend the distances by unknown forces To stir the elements over and under and into spirals These are not universal matters but a start A system solar from the dark

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Date: 7/9/2014 6:17:00 AM
Earl, I have just "discovered" your poetry ...i t is marvellous....i read several of your works in "Best Poetry"....and when time allows me I will undoubtedly read all your stuff....i think yo u are a gifted writer...I put you in my fav poet class....thanks for the delightful read today...........with my best wishes.....Syd
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 7/9/2014 8:31:00 AM
Good morning Syd, Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad that you have taken an interest in my works. The poems, as you can see, take on a life of their own. System Solar is out there but in a good way. Thanks again. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 7/9/2014 6:10:00 AM
very interesting thoughts...well expressed .....well done !
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 7/9/2014 8:36:00 AM
Hi Syd, Thank you for commenting. I truly appreciate it and happy that you are enjoying my poetry. Take care. Earl

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