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Strong feelings flow off, spirit low falls How free she can be when her emotions are released Passion flows like twinkling stars, burning balls. Sensuality comes from deep within the being, a beast! Amor hits, stays, spreading clasps hearts that are deceased. Running with naked fingers and toes through the halls. Sensuality comes from deep within the being, a beast. Passion flows like twinkling stars, burning balls! A whimsical rarity made her perspire like winter falls. Easily influenced in rare manner, as I run fingers between her toes creased. Passion flows like twinkling stars, burning balls. Sensuality comes from deep within the being, a beast. I'll assist her, unbuttoning her clothes, delicately at least. Her charms have overcome my sensibilities, in my halls. Sensuality comes from deep within the being, a beast. Passion flows like twinkling stars, burning balls! * Somewhat of a Mirrored Refrain...lol... for Jared Picketts contest. *I have to note that burning balls means Suns and Planets in space...lol

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Date: 6/21/2011 7:43:00 AM
"A whimsical rarity"---Nice
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Date: 4/4/2010 5:05:00 AM
Well penned poem. Congrats for 1st win
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Date: 3/31/2010 7:55:00 AM
A very nice mirrored refrain. Congratulations on your win. Caryl
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Date: 3/31/2010 1:57:00 AM
Congratulations, Marty for a well-deserved win. (^_^) Noel
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Date: 3/30/2010 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations Marty. A great poem. As for your notes... I believe you... I think!!! :) cheers Margaret
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Date: 3/30/2010 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations on first place, I found this contest, a very difficult challenge, my entry was a poem about nature.....it is called Winter Dream, I guess in comparision it was dull.. or perhaps, I failed the form...but the contest did inspire and challenge me.. anyways, you are awesome.. love Constance
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Date: 3/30/2010 5:12:00 PM
Marty, all I can say is WOW..... I have read this poem a couple dozen times loving it more and more with each time.... SHOCKING that this took first... OHHH NO...... You had the best refrain, that is what I was looking for.... Bask in this victory my friend... You deserve it** Passion flows like twinkling stars, burning balls--Sensuality comes from deep within the being, a beast..** Absolutely catching my friend.... Congratulations......:JP]
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Date: 3/30/2010 2:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this mirrored refrin. Joyce
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Date: 3/30/2010 12:44:00 PM
Well done, Marty!!! Congratulations...wow 1st place!! Good for you!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/10/2010 1:31:00 PM
Your crazy man- made me smile- and ty for the explanation too
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