Synopsis

Strong feelings flow off, spirit low falls
How free she can be when her emotions are released
Passion flows like twinkling stars, burning balls.
Sensuality comes from deep within the being, a beast!

Amor hits, stays, spreading clasps hearts that are deceased.
Running with naked fingers and toes through the halls.
Sensuality comes from deep within the being, a beast.
Passion flows like twinkling stars, burning balls!

A whimsical rarity made her perspire like winter falls.
Easily influenced in rare manner, as I run fingers between her toes creased.
Passion flows like twinkling stars, burning balls.
Sensuality comes from deep within the being, a beast.

I'll assist her, unbuttoning her clothes, delicately at least.
Her charms have overcome my sensibilities, in my halls.
Sensuality comes from deep within the being, a beast.
Passion flows like twinkling stars, burning balls!


* Somewhat of a Mirrored Refrain...lol... for Jared Picketts contest.
*I have to note that burning balls means Suns and Planets in space...lol
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Mister Roboto Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 7:43 AM
"A whimsical rarity"---Nice
Mehta Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 5:05 AM
Well penned poem. Congrats for 1st win
Muzzey Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 7:55 AM
A very nice mirrored refrain. Congratulations on your win. Caryl
Villarosa Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 1:57 AM
Congratulations, Marty for a well-deserved win. (^_^) Noel
Foster Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 7:40 PM
Congratulations Marty. A great poem. As for your notes... I believe you... I think!!! :) cheers Margaret
La France Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 6:40 PM
Congratulations on first place, I found this contest, a very difficult challenge, my entry was a poem about nature.....it is called Winter Dream, I guess in comparision it was dull.. or perhaps, I failed the form...but the contest did inspire and challenge me.. anyways, you are awesome.. love Constance
Pickett Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 5:12 PM
Marty, all I can say is WOW..... I have read this poem a couple dozen times loving it more and more with each time.... SHOCKING that this took first... OHHH NO...... You had the best refrain, that is what I was looking for.... Bask in this victory my friend... You deserve it** Passion flows like twinkling stars, burning balls--Sensuality comes from deep within the being, a beast..** Absolutely catching my friend.... Congratulations......:JP]
Johnson Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 2:28 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this mirrored refrin. Joyce
Richards Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Well done, Marty!!! Congratulations...wow 1st place!! Good for you!! Love, Carrie
White Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 1:31 PM
Your crazy man- made me smile- and ty for the explanation too
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