Symphony Orchestra

There’s a player up there
                          stomach resting on his chair
     blowing air
                          through at least a hundred feet of twisted    golden tubing
                                                   and 
A man putting oil on a slide
                          makes toothy talk aside
    to a skinny tuba player (imagine a tuba player being skinny)
                          who takes the fat horn on his lap

Drummers    four    all stand
                          Testing skins and whatnot with their hands
     The first selection    using such collection?
                           NOISY    indeed!

Then    there are the winds
                           All in a row    with chimneys on the end
    sucking       for dear life    it would seem
                           the flutist (or is it flautist?) is a dream

Finally    the violins    
                       adjusting gadgets     rooting with their chins
    cellos    (big violins)    screw into the floor
                       basses    (huge violins)     as a rule    sit astool

Here comes a fiddler    late
                   must have had a heavy date
    of all the nerve    he turns and bows
                   then sits    that’s more than law allows
                                       for

Here comes the conductor     with a stick!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/20/2009 4:11:00 PM
Awesome write here, Daver ... great imagery ... even E.T. would understand the cast ... smile ... hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving next week ... I'm off to spend a few days with my son and family ... going on the train ... FUN, FUN, FUN ... smile
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Date: 11/20/2009 8:40:00 AM
well done..I can see it all playing out very clearly... a pencil thin man playing that tuba..put a smile on this man's face, thanks...TAH
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Date: 11/18/2009 4:45:00 AM
My Daver, This is an interesting take on a Symphony Orchestra. Hurray for the conductor, who with the stick, (Didn't "stick" mean the "Word of God" in ancient Hebrew times?) makes all things work together for good...sound, hopefully. You have a unique style and wisdom. Thank you for commenting on my poem. AND for encouragement. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 11/14/2009 11:11:00 AM
Hey! Dave, your love of music comes through in this one - it just can't be helped. I hear the Philharmonic tuning up and without that stick to keep them in line - what would it be? Wonderful writing, my friend. YOu have a way of bringing everything to life for the reader. Thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/12/2009 4:32:00 PM
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration Daver. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/12/2009 2:12:00 PM
Sounds like an interesting symphony. It takes all kinds of people with all kinds of interest to make the world go around. Nicely put together for a little humor. Thanks for the comments on my poems. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/12/2009 1:02:00 PM
Got a good chuckle out of this one. I was in the band in high school--a wonder the instructor put up with me for my lack of talent. My daughter is a talented flutist. This is such an enjoyable poem. Your talent shines in this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Karen
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