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Symphony of Nature Collaboration

She is a pull of energetic fascination 
untouched by mortals she does ace 
every mirriored image I perceive 
Unequalled by her beauty   
with headiness and awe 
I sweet oblige her purge   
exalting her with sweeet mentality 
 
In admiration I do bow 
to the symphony of her nature 
exalted and refreshed
by her giant gift I lose myself 
in admiration of her.  

7/6/2019
"for contest FINETUNE THIS COLLABORATION sponsored by Line Gauthier".

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/5/2019 6:11:00 AM

wanted to SoupMail you re typos "mirriored" and "sweeet" (although I kinda like the second). - please delete this comment once read

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/5/2019 6:08:00 AM

Thanks for entering my contest. Love your ratio of simplicity to emotion, Pixie. Congrats.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2019 4:37:00 PM

You have risen to the occasion and produced the 'collaborative' result which the sponsor is asking for! Good luck in the contest. Warm regards /x/ paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/7/2019 1:05:00 AM

An intriguing piece with the right amount of sensuality.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/6/2019 7:38:00 AM

a beautiful tribute to nature Pixie good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx