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Symbols of Pride

Of Western Red Cedar, totems are made Though few have been built in the last decade Tribal emblems speak of lost lives with pride Striking they appear as storm clouds collide The Ojibwe graveyards can still be seen As in reverence visitors convene Symbols of Native American tribes With colorful markings they are inscribed Homage is paid to a culture now lost Many died in battle, paid such a cost As thunder rumbles, it chills the viewers They know that white men were the wrongdoers Pilfering land and breaking trust offered Treaties ignored as land filled their coffers By Carolyn Devonshire, August 11, 2011 Entry for Francine’s “Totems in the Darkening Sky” contest

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Date: 8/23/2011 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine Roberts' "Totems in the Darkening Sky" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2011 10:09:00 AM
Congratulation for win again. bl
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Date: 8/20/2011 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Great job... Caryl Ramsdale
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Date: 8/20/2011 10:16:00 AM
LNC..I read this with pleasure..your never disappoint...congrats. BG
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Date: 8/20/2011 8:58:00 AM
Many congrats to you, my friend : ) No, my mum didn't find the escaped snake but she said they'd sure know all about it if she did
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Date: 8/20/2011 3:48:00 AM
hey Carolyn congrats on your great win David
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Date: 8/20/2011 1:55:00 AM
Great writing as always Carolyn. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/19/2011 10:27:00 PM
congrats on your 8th place win in the contest Carolyn, wonderful couplet
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Date: 8/15/2011 2:38:00 PM
Touching and tender tribute to the Native Americans, Carolyn
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Date: 8/14/2011 4:21:00 PM
The treatment of the Indian tribes was a terrible thing. I hope history never repeats itself. Many steps have been taken to rectify the past and eventually I hope we can put it in the past. love phyl
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Date: 8/13/2011 4:08:00 PM
l, love the information about Indian tribes and history.Nice flow while we learn, Carolyn. ive spoken with some Seminoles here. Very interesting and proud heritage.
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Date: 8/12/2011 1:37:00 PM
Wow Carolyn, what a wonderful rhyme about the totem pole. Surely a winner. Love your poetry. This is a fav. for sure. ~Love~Glenna
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Date: 8/12/2011 2:00:00 AM
Sure am glad to be able to get some comments on these fine poems. I am partial to indian poems. Good luck in the contest. Yes the indians were treated badly. Many tribes no longer exist. How would you like to be the last white person in america. Hmmm may try to write one on that. Keep up the good!!!! Charles
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Date: 8/11/2011 11:16:00 PM
I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 8:41:00 PM
how many civilizations lost though they were a tribes. still social nations they had their pride. but bullets beat the arrows and only few survived. God kept a remanante so that some are still alive.
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Date: 8/11/2011 8:34:00 PM
this was a fantastical write good luck in the contest. cory
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Date: 8/11/2011 6:16:00 PM
I think this is fantastic..You used all three and said it all..A winner for sure..jo
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Date: 8/11/2011 3:31:00 PM
what was done to this race was terrible, this poem is a good reminder, that we should never forget. beautifully expressed i like this a lot well done
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Date: 8/11/2011 3:28:00 PM
Great work here! I really enjoy your writing! thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 8/11/2011 2:55:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, beautiful work.Lee
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