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Sylvan Summer Part I

The escape commenced. The endless drive from middleclass suburbia ala Levittown; across hill and dale, packed in a 1947 black beauty of a Lincoln Continental; to the land of Peyton Place and Steven King; Maine. Lemon up and tangerine down, Dad drives. We wiggle and whine, Mom scolds. A leg cramping journey made longer by one too many pee brakes. The dirt road pinged rocks of the chrome bumper; we near the amorphous clapboard dream. The violet light of the dash shows nine o’clock. The ramshackle ashen white farmhouse full of kissin cousins, cows and chickens; Madonna’s home. Uncle Ken a mere decorative necessity; Uncle ken who could charm the pants right off ya, and obviously had, voila; cousins Georgie and Wayne. Uncle Ken of the sweet smile and Chiclet teeth; beer bottle in hand with his concrete company hat cocked to the side; one long, tall, strawberry blonde, drink of water. He was a God to us, two little girls, Snow White and Rose Red. His only rival his son, gorgeous George; Georgie boy, first cousin, first love. Nights saw us hunker down under patch work. Kissin cousins in twinned rooms. Meeting for body heat in the frosted dawn in a single wrought iron bed, scrawny eight year olds. Heads under quilts breathing in and out to warm the pocket of air we were the only heat on the second floor. With a mighty dash; reminiscent of our favorite mouse [Mighty] a charge was launched across the unfinished attic to the backstairs to country kitchen. Barefeet dodge raised square nails and splinters. Bark bits impress frozen soles, as the stove's in house woodpile is jumped. Twin dynamos skate across the linoleum to a copper kettle's whistle. A white Windsor landing achieved, Aunt Madonna pours cornflakes in porcelain white china bowls with a laugh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/4/2012 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "A Summer Memory" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2012 4:27:00 PM
Wow Deb, you are on a winning roll with these awesome poems. Congratulations on another number 1 placement!
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Date: 4/30/2012 12:25:00 PM
wow what a lovely web you have spun...........bravo !... congrats on the placement..........~sashi
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Date: 4/30/2012 10:53:00 AM
What a vivacious tale you have spun. I like it a lot. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/30/2012 2:57:00 AM
smashing!...my hands are tied, so here's a generic sweet cheers to you for a great win... :) huggs and love, debbie!
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Date: 4/29/2012 9:47:00 PM
congrats on your win with this descriptiive memory of youth
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Date: 4/29/2012 9:27:00 AM
Don't stop now!!! no! lol This is awsome Debbie!! I was spellbound! Captivated by your panache!!! Brought back memories of my own--including the black lincoln...or was it a caddy? LOL big hugs my dear--love ya debby...OH...CONGRATULATIONS!! lol :)
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Date: 4/29/2012 8:59:00 AM
I wanted this one to go on and on and on....what amazing memories....so much like my own recollections, yet described with the flair and descriptions that are denied my own capabilities....how I wish I could do it this well!! Congratulations, Deb!
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Date: 4/29/2012 5:09:00 AM
Hi congrats on your win, sorry this is a cut and paste congrats, I am on my hols with limited connectHi ionXX
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Date: 3/5/2009 4:35:00 AM
Americana at its finest. Did you notice, there was no free medical, heating assistance, section 8 housing, food stamps and they were all responsible for raising their own kids. Times have changed. I had all the uncles and aunts and family gatherings. Seems like we lost so much. With every step forward, we were dancing, two steps back. Vince
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Date: 3/4/2009 3:48:00 PM
An easy return to childhood. Thanks for the ride.
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Date: 2/26/2009 3:45:00 PM
You have such a wonderful way of story telling, my dear, talented friend! Off to two! Hugs!
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Date: 2/25/2009 12:58:00 PM
Wow this is just gorgeous. I love your style which is down-to-earth but still creates beautiful images. This is an awesome piece!!! Thanks so much for your comments on my stuff!
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Date: 2/24/2009 11:46:00 PM
love the last line "madonna pours cornflakes in porcelain white china bowls with a laugh" gosh thats awsome writting. (i gotta step my game up)lol- love and peace:james
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