Sycamore Memories-Win

"To hold as 'twere, the mirror up to nature. " William Shakespeare," Hamlet 1601."


Window covered by a sycamore tree
Constant friend of my snowy Maple days
Memories spring as insects on a tree
Turn my gloomy days in glorious days

Hippocrates got his inspiration
For research in medicine to begin
Buddh sat under it for meditation
The enlightenment of mind to attain.

Desdemona sat sighing under it
In agony to hear willow song treat
Flying to Egypt Mary stopped a bit
Crann ban “Money tree” in Irish spirit

To demystify health, to personalize
To me sycamore is to poetize.

 ** The notion of a "mirror held up to nature" has been taken over for any mimetic theory of art — the idea that art should represent reality and nature as closely as possible**           

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Revised and Reposted    May 4, 2014
Form : Shakespearean sonnet in Pentameter
Dr.Ram Mehta
Contest: Shakespeare by Frank H.
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Dr. Ram Mehta
Date: 4/19/2011
Fourth Place win in :
Contest:The Tree sponsored by Constance La france-A rambling poet
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* I wrote a sonnet Maple Memories in 2000 while living in Windsor-ONT 
and was posted on 6/29/2005 on PS as Maple Memories.
   The present poem is re-written for the contest.
** Maple Days- Maple is the national tree of Canada.
* Buddha is pronounced one syllable
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 6:11 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in Constance's "The Tree" contest. Love, Carol
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April 25, 2011 at 7:34 AM
This poem is so different from the other poems of this contest Dr.Mehta.Wonderful.Congrats on your win--kashinath
Mannan Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 4:58 AM
This is beautufl and informative as well. many many congrats.
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 2:33 PM
Dr. Ram, I am glad to see this one again as I review the winners' list.Congratulations to you on this look at the beautiful sycamore tree.
Horne Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 7:51 AM
Many congrats and a happy Easter to you : )
Onclaud Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 6:23 AM
cheesr for the high win , dr. ram... splendid write...:) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 8:58 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your 4th place win in the tree contest with this lovely piece on the sycamore..my friend.. a great win to celebrate Easter Sunday luv..
Freeman Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 6:53 PM
Great to see you in the winner's circle, Dr Ram. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in place. Agape, Moses
Richards Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 5:46 PM
Lovely to see that you also wrote of the Sycamore tree. One of my favorites!! Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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April 23, 2011 at 5:41 PM
I love the way you teach through your poetry, Dr. Ram. This is outstanding! Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 5:20 PM
I commented on this early Dr. Ram and am so happy to see this topping the winner's circle. Lainie
George   Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 11:54 AM
Beautiful, Dr. Ram. Sure to place high on score board. I live in Ontario most of the year - not to far from Windsor. The maple tree is a wonderous tree for so many reasons. I am now in North Carolina where I reside part of the year and I love the sycamore as well. Best wishes to you. Lainie
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 12:26 AM
buddha is really one syllable?? they just say "bud?"
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 12:25 AM
You really like those maple trees, Dr.Ram. You are a proud Canadian!!
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April 20, 2011 at 12:14 AM
And poetize it you have done well. Keep the great writing going! Smiles. Dane Ann
M Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 8:14 PM
The sycamore tree is a truely wonderful one. Great write
Sweetheart Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 5:25 PM
Perfectly elegant Dr. Ram.. a wondrous write on this lovely tree ..good luck in the contest.. luv.. I redid my TABOO entry just a bit to include the DUSK theme presented by dear Nette if u want to take a second look now.. appreciate luv..
La France Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 4:39 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Wonderful, soup mail in a moment~~
Foulk Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 2:35 PM
just love the Sycamore tree, this was a very refreshing piece.
Long Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 2:14 PM
Wasn't sure how to write this poem but you did a magnificent job with it good luck!
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April 19, 2011 at 2:12 PM
Dr.Ram, I love to write. But i have never written different styles which is why I like this site so much. It challenges me to use different words, themes and styles Since I started using this site I have written my first couplet and tanka.. Look forward to sharing more with you.. cory
Austin Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 1:47 PM
Yes. There is something extra-alive about a tree. I have always held them in majesty. Without them our planet would die. Many of my most vivid memories are concerned with trees. Valuable message, Doc. Love, daver
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April 19, 2011 at 9:02 AM
The Sycamore tree is one of the oldest species of trees on this earth. Thank you Dr Ram, I learned a lot today. Judy
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