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Swollen Eyes

She looked at the mirror She took in her swollen eyes Puffy from last night's tears Swollen eyes Reflecting her swollen heart Swollen from too much scar tissue Swollen from the surge of emotions That had expanded its walls to near breaking She listlessly dabbed at her eyes with some water Eyes that had been called beautiful Captivating Bewitching Enticing Alluring Now….an awful mess She looked at her face Sighing She crawled back to her bed To nurse her pain To regain hours Stolen away From last night’s sleep And somewhere there In her swollen heart A little fissure appeared Imperceptible to her And the overflow of emotions The overflow of blood Found release Drop by drop Bit by bit A growing trickle While she slept While she wept Her life drained away While she cursed the day She was born Not realizing That she would not live to see another morn Her little heart would rest Her little eyes would close Swollen eyes Swollen heart No more.... Her beauty restored In a land where Betrayal would be no more Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/11/2014 10:10:00 AM
Beautiful realization in the core of swollen heart adorned with excellent rhythm. Every drop depicts a sensational picture here. Loved always, my friend, bl
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/12/2014 9:35:00 PM
Thank you for this lovely post, which in itself, is very poetic and sweet. BL...your continued support is so encouraging. Thank you!
Date: 1/8/2014 8:28:00 AM
HEARTFELT BEAUTIFULLY PENNED EILEEN
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/8/2014 8:30:00 AM
Awwwwww....Liam...here you are! :) Thanks for the post, my dear. I hope that means there is another romantic poem I can sink my teeth into.... Thanks for stopping by!
Date: 1/7/2014 8:03:00 AM
I believe I have read this one before. It is very well expressed and makes me sad, I don't want to be sad. Will a hug help? I know it will help me.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/7/2014 8:51:00 AM
No, my dear. It is new....however since the theme is a depressing one....perhaps it FEELS like you've read it before. Oh dear....I guess a lot of my work is rather depressing. I wrote something on suicide a while back, but I deleted that one....I don't know if you read that or not...anyway...point is...YES, a hug would help....Thanks ever so much! Please don't be sad.....
Date: 1/7/2014 1:48:00 AM
Hi Eileen, A very moving write well penned.. Ken
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/7/2014 1:53:00 AM
Thank you for your visit, Ken....Much appreciated.
Date: 1/7/2014 1:34:00 AM
Very touchy and poignant write on betrayal, Eileen
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/7/2014 1:54:00 AM
Thanks ever so much for visiting, Dr Ram. Good to have you here.

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