Notes About The Poem

Swingin On a Star

After: Harlequin’s Carnival by Joan Miro, 1925.PD 
After: Bing Crosby - Swinging On A Star (1944)

I try to apply colors like words that shape poems, 
like notes that shape music.  - Joan Miro

Listen to the mockingbird rings from ear to ear driven in a
frenzy of delight, naysaying the evil torts of Hieronymus 
Bosch’s gardens. Feasting on nature’s foreplay, stringing
leaps of fancy, parading to an oompah-pah, lured by a rendez-
vous with Dali and melted timepieces. 

to fly
to soar
soar unconfined
soar scored
scored notes
scored lines

The bliss of true tones, winged squirmings,
dancing snakes, acrobatic merfolk swinging on stars,
the ensemble gestates.

Cues coil, ping, the clocks tick; let your
wired heart purr. Jack-in-the Box to Jack outside,
take a spoonful of sugar with your medicine, & twirl 
your partner round and round.



First published by illumen 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Warlov Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 12:54 PM
I liked Thelonious Monk's explanation of playing two adjacent piano keys; wanting to hear the tone between. My brother, a professional pianist, said that was absurd... I love this world!
Ashley Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 8:40 PM
Debbie, a festival of delightful thoughts and imagery. Bright and blissful, entertaining and enjoyed. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 10:44 PM
Yes Debbie, I saw the artwork and this is an awesome explanation of fanciful sensations evoked :)
Guzzi Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 8:49 PM
Thanks, Susan - it was a poetic explanation of the sensations evoked by seeing the art ;).
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 1:13 AM
Deb. This is a great free verse. It really complements the picture you showed with it.
Guzzi Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 5:22 PM
Thanks Andie!
Dutta Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Nice Piece. Really enjoyable. Hugs
Warlov Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 11:17 AM
Jazzy- Fleets & beats- Vervatious
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 5:21 AM
This is delightful Debbie. How are you doing? Cheers, Connie
Roper Avatar
May 19, 2017 at 11:18 PM
Thank you for sharing the poem :) enjoyed reading, Debbie~*
Fields Avatar
May 19, 2017 at 1:06 PM
it made my mind go to Bing Crosby in a french Cirque Du Soleil tights - dancing with children and dancing snakes, acrobatic flying around - joy and laughter bright colors
Guzzi Avatar
May 19, 2017 at 10:44 PM
YES, Verlecia! Thanks for the comment!
Onclaud Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 11:55 AM
miro does this to me, debbie.. fanciful, spontaneous nuggets of scenes that invite!..huggs
Guzzi Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 4:44 PM
His work is delightful! Thanks nette!
Krampe Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 5:28 PM
Like the picture, your poem is a frenzy of delight. The comparison with Bosch is marvelous.
Guzzi Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 4:43 PM
Thanks so much Anges!
Chircop Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 3:54 PM
I am glad this lovely poem got published sweet ma. Definitely entertained me .)::)..Loved it.
Guzzi Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 3:56 PM
Hi little Ma!!! How is Spring where you are? Are you warm yet?
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