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Swim These Fields

The trees expand right over the water Bringing awe, perfect brightness to the sound The free-flowing brook moves swiftly over Eyes can capture the young feelings abound I enjoy the emotion that’s around Loving of nature is proudly encased Moisture by the emanating fog's sound Towards a peaceful life that’s interlaced I will always go cherish this day here No other time nor place can sure compare And my heart will always exist right here Forever I will swim these fields and lairs Tenderly open your eyes towards me So when I come near, you can surely see Russell Sivey

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Jack Horne

Date: 3/2/2014 10:24:00 AM

lovely sonnet indeed, my friend. Hope you're having a great weekend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2014 10:55:00 PM

very nice ending couplet, Russell and I really like the subject of your poem. Would love to find a brook like this and just jump right into it.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/1/2014 8:47:00 AM

What a fantastic day.. Enjoying the beauty of nature.. I can not wait for spring like weather to finally get here.. Wonderful write here today Russell ... Tim

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 3/1/2014 7:53:00 AM

Nice one, Russell. Makes me long for summer. Especially liked the twelfth line... and there IS something about those braches reaching over the water... peace-giving. Cheers from Cyndi

Skat A

Date: 3/1/2014 5:50:00 AM

thanks for the beauty. .. swimming pool of everlasting emotions. Skat

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2014 1:00:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your sonnet today..I can see the sound with the umbrella of tree limbs and foliage..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Funom Makama

Date: 2/28/2014 11:20:00 AM

Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/28/2014 8:40:00 AM

Russell this takes me there the imagery is superb and the sonnet sings of romance and happiness hugs

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/28/2014 8:18:00 AM

Beautifully written !! What a lovely day to cherish as is this poem !! Enjoyed !!

Tim B

Date: 2/28/2014 7:56:00 AM

Russell, BRILLIANT. I love the title, I love the synesthesia involved here. Such a beautiful way to capture what our emotions and feelings do when we encounter something lovely in nature. Thanks for sharing my friend.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 2/28/2014 5:38:00 AM

Dear Russell, poetic peace allowing inspiration's ease to create words of soothing solstice. 7 my best, chuck

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/28/2014 1:56:00 AM

You take me back to the country side with this and I begin to see the bamboo trees bending their heads on the river. I really enjoy this,and it really touches my childhood as a yokel.