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Swerving Through Springtime's Shine

Shorelines toss her sweet sensation with saucy flair, sealing fresh soil of a season’s shape, so divine; where songs submit to a bird notes' smiles. My, show stopper swerving a gait To slowly slip by…secretly. For Brian Strand: Contest 205 , any form, max 10 lines ~ Alliteration ~ Reposted 9/18/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/24/2014 7:47:00 AM
Great alliteration and wonderful imagery! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/17/2014 7:27:00 AM
I enjoyed rereading this beauty.
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Date: 7/13/2014 3:38:00 PM
- Nette, a wonderful first place!! - Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/13/2014 2:42:00 AM
Brilliant write Nette! Congrats on awesome first place win dear// Upma//
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Date: 7/13/2014 2:07:00 AM
Congrats on your superb win,Nette..Wonderful write...
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Date: 7/12/2014 10:38:00 PM
nette, beautiful, hot spark & top win. Congrats. Mohan
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Date: 7/12/2014 8:28:00 PM
Beautifully written, one almost forgets that alliteration was required, this flows brilliantly, without being forced or over the top. Lovely !!!
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Date: 7/12/2014 7:51:00 PM
Fantastic write, Nette!!.. Congrats on top win!.. Hugs, Arlene
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Date: 7/12/2014 7:04:00 PM
wow Nette Naughty but nice Congratulations ..... lol Seren
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Date: 7/12/2014 2:52:00 PM
Congratulations on you great entry in the alliteration contest. Congratulations on no. 1. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/12/2014 1:23:00 PM
Well done and beautifully written Nette. Congratulations on your win... Verlena
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Date: 7/12/2014 10:13:00 AM
Lovely, Nette, your words drip honey; God has given you a beautiful gift. Congratulations for sitting on the top.
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Date: 7/12/2014 9:38:00 AM
Congrats on the win nette
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Date: 7/12/2014 7:55:00 AM
A beautiful piece, congratulations.
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Date: 7/12/2014 6:44:00 AM
A wonderful win nette congrats... Hugs Tim
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Date: 7/12/2014 6:07:00 AM
Grats on your top win!! :)
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Date: 7/12/2014 6:06:00 AM
dropping back with my congratulations Nette. Hugs Jan xxxx
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Date: 7/12/2014 5:31:00 AM
Lovely, gay and sweet summer flirt. A very worthy winner. Congratulations, Nette. // paul
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Date: 7/12/2014 5:00:00 AM
Congrats on the first place win in my contest, nette and thanks for the support as always
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Date: 7/9/2014 7:05:00 PM
hahah i like the images jolly, flirty, yet somewhat sweet and really girly thing here in your poem.. :D!!!
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Date: 7/9/2014 4:27:00 AM
- A lovely poem, dear Nette! - Good luck in the contest - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/8/2014 7:20:00 PM
Love your imagery in this poem, i's full of summer sizzle and flirtaionious spirit of a young girl of innocence, giving the young men something to drop their jaws for, than simply walking away with a pert smile on her sun tanned face. Great job I also think this is a winner good luck. cheri and thank you for your cool comments, and for visiting my site today. cheri
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Date: 7/8/2014 6:14:00 PM
Reads like a winner ..Great letter of choice to use to bounce words from..It is a saultry letter..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 7/8/2014 4:24:00 PM
A seductive siren indeed dear Nette..Lovely playful.poem.Hope you are doing well.dear.: )
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Date: 7/8/2014 3:48:00 PM
Sweet teaser of a poem. She sways then slips by. Enticed!
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