Swerving Through Springtime's Shine

Shorelines toss her sweet sensation with saucy flair, sealing fresh soil of a season’s shape, so divine; where songs submit to a bird notes' smiles. My, show stopper swerving a gait To slowly slip by…secretly. For Brian Strand: Contest 205 , any form, max 10 lines ~ Alliteration ~ Reposted 9/18/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Michaels Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Great alliteration and wonderful imagery! Congrats on your win!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 7:27 AM
I enjoyed rereading this beauty.
Andresen Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 3:38 PM
- Nette, a wonderful first place!! - Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A. Sharma Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 2:42 AM
Brilliant write Nette! Congrats on awesome first place win dear// Upma//
Arowolo Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 2:07 AM
Congrats on your superb win,Nette..Wonderful write...
Chutani Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 10:38 PM
nette, beautiful, hot spark & top win. Congrats. Mohan
Richards Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:28 PM
Beautifully written, one almost forgets that alliteration was required, this flows brilliantly, without being forced or over the top. Lovely !!!
Smith Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 7:51 PM
Fantastic write, Nette!!.. Congrats on top win!.. Hugs, Arlene
Roberts Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 7:04 PM
wow Nette Naughty but nice Congratulations ..... lol Seren
Johnson Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 2:52 PM
Congratulations on you great entry in the alliteration contest. Congratulations on no. 1. Love, Joyce
Walker  Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 1:23 PM
Well done and beautifully written Nette. Congratulations on your win... Verlena
Gibson Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 10:13 AM
Lovely, Nette, your words drip honey; God has given you a beautiful gift. Congratulations for sitting on the top.
Hoffman Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 9:38 AM
Congrats on the win nette
Lamoureux Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 7:55 AM
A beautiful piece, congratulations.
Smith Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 6:44 AM
A wonderful win nette congrats... Hugs Tim
Nance Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 6:07 AM
Grats on your top win!! :)
Allison Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 6:06 AM
dropping back with my congratulations Nette. Hugs Jan xxxx
Callus Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 5:31 AM
Lovely, gay and sweet summer flirt. A very worthy winner. Congratulations, Nette. // paul
Mehta Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 5:00 AM
Congrats on the first place win in my contest, nette and thanks for the support as always
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 7:05 PM
hahah i like the images jolly, flirty, yet somewhat sweet and really girly thing here in your poem.. :D!!!
Andresen Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 4:27 AM
- A lovely poem, dear Nette! - Good luck in the contest - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dunn Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Love your imagery in this poem, i's full of summer sizzle and flirtaionious spirit of a young girl of innocence, giving the young men something to drop their jaws for, than simply walking away with a pert smile on her sun tanned face. Great job I also think this is a winner good luck. cheri and thank you for your cool comments, and for visiting my site today. cheri
Kendrick Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 6:14 PM
Reads like a winner ..Great letter of choice to use to bounce words from..It is a saultry letter..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Chircop Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 4:24 PM
A seductive siren indeed dear Nette..Lovely playful.poem.Hope you are doing well.dear.: )
Sabre Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 3:48 PM
Sweet teaser of a poem. She sways then slips by. Enticed!
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