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Sweetest Night

Sweet moonlight, sweet chill of night, sweet clouds of night - handmade, tissue paper roses adorn gravestone rows on this baritone night, more fragrant and full more frail than bitter air. Why does winter winds stir our despair, wilting sweetest flowers here? Perhaps, silver-laced flakes of snow fall light upon lover's lips to remind souls of their resilience. What is more sweet than this? One, tender tear reflects the light upon dark creases of your cheek. Our eyes slow to rest on icy pond from the banks of sweet reminiscence. Its current shifts beneath to remind of spring. Unsheathed trees conceive poetic sounds. Their muse dances to melodies sweeter than love. Moonlight mingles merrily with dried leaves on the breeze. And the rotted ground ignores this whimsical whirling above. I can taste the bittersweet breath of earth's decay then close my eyes in dreams of sweet rebirth. This is the winter of our age.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/9/2017 7:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Rhonda.
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Date: 2/27/2017 6:01:00 AM
Beautiful, congratulations Rhonda:)
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Date: 2/27/2017 1:27:00 AM
This is beautiful and so meaningful. The winter of our age. Bittersweet and some sugar nevertheless. Kai
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Date: 2/26/2017 4:06:00 PM
Superb imagery and palette painted here, Rhonda - congratulations!
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Date: 2/26/2017 12:30:00 PM
Rhonda, your lines are beautiful and the imagery paints wonderful visions in my mind. A gorgeous write.
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Date: 2/19/2017 7:38:00 AM
Beautiful write Rhonda..I like the contrast of seasons and emotions...
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Date: 2/18/2017 11:54:00 PM
Beautiful words here. Nice images throughout! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/17/2017 11:05:00 AM
Wow, simply breathtaking. I am so in awe of your talent, your ability to create a vision with your words amazes me. This is absolutely beautiful, there is a tinge of sadness I think, perhaps the missing of spring or a longing for a memory of a springtime past, but still... the night you paint is so euphoric and serene. Really nice Rhonda. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 2/17/2017 5:08:00 AM
This is beautiful..It speaks so beautifully of nature..we many times take forgranted..If only in our dreams..we rebirth to see this enchantement...Beautiful poem sweet friend.
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Date: 2/17/2017 2:23:00 AM
- "What is more sweet than this?" ..... Beautiful written, Rhonda - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2017 2:14:00 AM
Whirling verses that your muse generates captivates the reader with its thunderous beauty dear, Rhonda! A seven!
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Date: 2/16/2017 10:27:00 PM
Loved how you ended this, also loved these lines "roses adorn gravestone rows on this baritone night,"
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Date: 2/16/2017 9:25:00 PM
Loved
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Date: 2/16/2017 8:00:00 PM
Fantastic poetry, Rhonda. You do have THE GIFT!!
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Date: 2/16/2017 5:57:00 PM
Such a beautiful write Rhonda!! Reminds me of the time I made a dozen black paper roses for a 'boyfriend'!! Long stem and in a box!! Lol!! Long time ago!! Big Hugggs sweetie!! Best wishes for the contest!! Deb
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