Sweetest Is Their Sound

Extolling spring, oh, the robins are singing,
Lauding red-maple, bluebirds are frolicking,
There trills a cardinal fervent in courtship
Where on dogwood soulmate is gawking
And joining the symphony goldfinches fly in
Peeking from redbud, clad in blossoms pink, 
Reveling in affirmation: season is blooming;

Some are scouting for earthworms in grass,
Some are building nests, wooing romance,
Playful in blue, red, yellow, and dark brown
Wafting aerial stance sweetest is their sound.

Yes, they’re aware I’m watching their show
Peering through windows, they come and go
And slyly they spy when my beloved arrives—
Orioles now drop-by aiming jealous vibes
As sparrows stealthily pry, hovering close by;
Not till she feeds them, do I hear their sigh,
Swirling in pairs they choreograph up high--
Ah, such a thrill it is to see them merrily fly!

Alas, this friendship is built on fragile bond:
When their nests are empty they’ll be gone--
Rain forests to explore and oceans to cross,
Flexing life’s liberties they’ll span on and on
Perhaps to return to where they came from,
Perhaps to opulence of freedom paramount.

February 26, 2021
Placed 2nd: Spring Birds Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
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George Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 5:32 AM
"Swirling in pairs they choreograph up high-- Ah, such a thrill it is to see them merrily fly!"..... Love these lines and see this scene before my eyes. I love birds and spend a lot of time watching them. I am lost in the symphony of the trills you have echoed in this lovely poem by a variety of birds.
Ball Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 5:03 PM
Lovely Vijay as always. I do love the song birds and feed the little brown wrens all winter. Great job here. God Bless, JB
Crabtree Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 12:43 PM
A perfect poem for the upcoming season :)
Pandit Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Thank you Angela.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 3:18 AM
How cute the line: Yes, they’re aware I’m watching their show/Peering through windows, they come and go//And a lovely way to end your poem!
Pandit Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 6:04 AM
Thank you Kim--much appreciate.
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 11:40 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem ... a winner for me the first time I read it, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 1:22 PM
Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.
La France Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 8:26 AM
Vijay, congratulations on your win in my Spring Birds Challenge with this pretty poem, well done _Constance
Pandit Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 1:22 PM
Thank you Constance--much appreciate.
Nicole Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 8:51 PM
"Yes, they’re aware I’m watching their show" :) And you have been enjoying every melodious moment. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. The images you paint, leave me in complete awe. I am wrapping your thoughts softly around me. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 1:21 PM
Thank you my friend for your kind remarks. Much appreciate, Brandy. Many thanks.
Edmonds  Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 5:05 PM
Beautiful are the birds that sweetly sing, hallowing the beginning of Spring, so are your words in wonderful verse... Belle
Pandit Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 1:21 PM
Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks, Belle.
Gentile Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 6:28 AM
The beauty of Spring anew is worth enduring the Winter and snow. Your lovely portrait of our feathered friends is also beautiful and refreshing! Happy Saturday
Pandit Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 6:42 AM
Thank you Mike for stopping by with your kind feedback. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Mcintosh Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 4:05 AM
Lovely,... I enjoyed and wish you a win. God bless you my friend. Love to you, Gina
Pandit Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 6:41 AM
Thank you Gina--much appreciate.
Sands Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Wow! What a spectacular poem this is! Very well written. A winner for sure and a FAV for me. I love this Vijay! :)
Pandit Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:51 PM
So special to hear that from you, Heidi. Much appreciate your vote of confidence. Many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
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February 26, 2021 at 9:25 AM
So beautifully written, Vijay! I love your description of the birds putting on a show and knowing you're watching them. (I try not to stare; don't want them to fly away.) Yes, it would have to be a fragile bond, considering the way birds migrate. Constance is sure to love this delightful entry. Best wishes in her contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Pandit Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:49 PM
Thank you Carolyn. Enjoyed reading your comments. Always a joy when you stop by. Many many thanks.
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February 26, 2021 at 6:51 AM
I love how you did this one Vijay. I expect this will soar high in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:47 PM
That is so very kind of you Richard. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Rose  Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 5:24 AM
I wish I owned a dictionary for nature words as full as this one. Every word is well placed to create a symphony of beauty that only you can create. Thank you for sharing Vijay, have a lovely weekend.
Pandit Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Much appreciate the complimentary remarks my friend. Always a pleasure when you visit. Many thanks, Vienna.
Cunningham Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 3:07 AM
A sure sign that winter is fading and they herald the start of a welcome spring. Well written Vijay, good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
Pandit Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:44 PM
We are seeing those signs slowly. Much appreciate your comments, as always, Tom. Many, many thanks.
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February 26, 2021 at 3:03 AM
Delightful poem. So many birds, many familiar i here in Spring. And a touch of romance completes a magnificent poem. Best for a win.
Pandit Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Much delight in your comments as well Victor. So very kind of you. Much appreciate. many thanks.
Andresen Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 2:05 AM
- Spring's wonderful choir ... it makes joy in every heart ... a beautiful poem, Vijay - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:42 PM
You say it best with your line: spring's wonderful choir! Much appreciate your visit and comments, Anne-Lise. many thanks.
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