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Sweet Watermelon Lips

honeyed flavor drips on watermelon’s core, pink flesh sweetening mouths …a zing like nectar's fragrance to thrill when popped rind gushes breaths taste moist syrup earthy aphrodisiac when melon lips grind, … as he sinks his teeth in mine nibbling juicy midnight love ! * aphrodisiac has 5 syllables www.howmanysyllables.com Sweet or Salty Contest of Andrea Dietrich

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Skat A

Date: 11/7/2013 11:56:00 AM

nice win....SKAT

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/6/2013 10:14:00 PM

Oh, nette I like this very much, congrats on your win. Thank you for coming to read my SEASONS ;}

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/6/2013 7:21:00 PM

Nette, Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2013 8:18:00 AM

Ah h!! Great quality poetry..Enjoyed the mood of the poem..Sara

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/5/2013 8:50:00 PM

Sensual write, Nette. Congrats on your placement!

David Fisher

Date: 11/5/2013 6:11:00 PM

Phew! that gets the juices flowing. Congrats on the win.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/5/2013 3:35:00 PM

hmmm very very suggestive ;) ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/5/2013 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

Donna Jones

Date: 11/5/2013 10:24:00 AM

Congratulations nette....:-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2013 7:48:00 AM

Beautiful imagery gave it away to me this must have been yours! I love the symbolism in it. Congrats on your win, Nette.

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/5/2013 12:51:00 AM

Well if the contest isn't over..I say this is a top place item in my view; if its over anyway, i say thanks for the quality write Nette..!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/30/2013 6:22:00 PM

Speaking of watermelon, check out my latest blog if you like...I know you are a voracious reader and if you haven't read this guy's stuff yet, I HIGHLY recommend...

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/29/2013 10:29:00 AM

sweet tasting beautiful piece

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/29/2013 3:38:00 AM

Blood pressure pill and cold shower time again....Scintillating and sensuous! - Tim

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 10/29/2013 1:57:00 AM

Ah, as only the Queen of Linguistics could do it. I enjoyed this sensual write, Nette. You're sure to do well in the contest. Licia :-)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/28/2013 9:22:00 AM

Andrea is going to love this watermellonicious post ..I am sure. : )Wowzer.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/28/2013 1:08:00 AM

Thank you for your comments on my black cat it is about my new kitten. she is this crazy but i love the little beast anyway.

Donna Jones

Date: 10/27/2013 3:00:00 PM

Winner winner winner.....:-) :-) :-)

Jack Horne

Date: 10/27/2013 2:06:00 PM

this is beautiful, Nette

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/27/2013 1:37:00 PM

Hi Nette, A lovely sensual write from you! Ken

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/27/2013 12:49:00 PM

Excellent tastes of watermelon descried with beautiful pink words. Wish you very good luck. Loved always, bl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/27/2013 9:22:00 AM

Clever and sexy write, good luck in the contest.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/27/2013 8:24:00 AM

Interesting take on the contest ...This passionate work reads like winning material..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/26/2013 11:13:00 PM

Lovely point of view to write on the subject so varied, nette

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/26/2013 8:37:00 PM

WOW very rich n visual intent, lol thanks for sharing a slice of the watermelon tonight and i'M gad you enjoyed my black cat. also would you mind reading and commenting on the other two i just posted I need some input on them. cheri