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Sweet Surprise

from derelict weeds fair blossoms shyly peek out- something amazing: talents sprout from the dark coves, giving sweet surprise to all

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Date: 3/11/2022 8:21:00 AM

I liked your Tanka, Valsa. Even in the worst lawns in our neighborhood, the wildflowers make their mark with their beauty. Hugs, Bill

Date: 3/10/2022 8:05:00 PM

-- and human life blossoms from a putrid seed! Very nicely penned, Valsa.

Date: 3/10/2022 10:34:00 AM

Another gem from your treasure chest of words! Aloha!

Date: 3/10/2022 9:34:00 AM

oh how sweet, and calling them talents!! nicely done.

Date: 3/10/2022 9:30:00 AM

A lovely write!

Date: 3/10/2022 5:20:00 AM

Nature is amazing! And you captured its sweet surprise in this lovely poem.

Date: 3/10/2022 2:21:00 AM

From natural "derelicts," we learn to value beauty hidden in all. Great offering, Sis. Shalom in Jesus

Date: 3/9/2022 9:47:00 PM

Wonderful poem! I love how you compared blossoms shyly peeking to talents sprouting! Such a sweet poem Valsa! <3 ~BJ