Sweet Surprise

from derelict weeds fair blossoms shyly peek out- something amazing: talents sprout from the dark coves, giving sweet surprise to all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 8:21 AM
I liked your Tanka, Valsa. Even in the worst lawns in our neighborhood, the wildflowers make their mark with their beauty. Hugs, Bill
Wolf Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 8:05 PM
-- and human life blossoms from a putrid seed! Very nicely penned, Valsa.
Leffanta Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Another gem from your treasure chest of words! Aloha!
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 9:34 AM
oh how sweet, and calling them talents!! nicely done.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 9:30 AM
A lovely write!
Pandit Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 5:20 AM
Nature is amazing! And you captured its sweet surprise in this lovely poem.
Deo Avatar
March 10, 2022 at 2:21 AM
From natural "derelicts," we learn to value beauty hidden in all. Great offering, Sis. Shalom in Jesus
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 9:47 PM
Wonderful poem! I love how you compared blossoms shyly peeking to talents sprouting! Such a sweet poem Valsa! <3 ~BJ
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