Poet Destroyer A Poet Alliteration

Sweet Sugar Cookies and Peanut Butter Bars

"I dream of Candy!"

Sweet cakes and peanut butter squares 
A living diabetic's nightmare. --  My heart 
sings to the beat, Under the Neutron Star Crunch
Sweet sugar cookies and peanut butter bars

Taunting whoopers, 
Dancing dum dum's, 
The sweetest silhouette show - in my room
Dreamy, Creamy Cupcakes in the afternoon
Cinnamon Cheerios cascade on my spoon
Sweeter than my sweet tooth
Now and later - a forever honeymoon

Jigglin' my jelly belly boo berry Butterfinger delight
I'm in love, licking the icy ICEE  all night long
Extra freshness, once I crop a top off of a mountain dew pop
My eyes sparkle like diamond dazzle razzles in the sky
I LIVE to fabricate my very own sugar extract R.E.M. Sleep
Savoring the sound of saliva trapped in my mouth
THIS night  -   ovulated buds   -  wait to feast!
Enjoying delicious dulce music sleepy symphony

Braggin' and embracin' a pinata pillow escapade
Enchanted by a cotton candy crave - calling my name

Lalaloopsy licorice and lemonade tea
The best-wet dream I've ever seen
Marshmallows of solitude dulcify every fresh fantasy
Enticing in a bright slushy skittles daydream freeze

One fat sunny bowl of cereals and cane
Crackerjack spell ---  chocolate chip swirls, 
Caramel lumps constipate the brain
Sizing - peanuts and in a popcorn party payday
Wrigley's wild winter Spearmint Breath parade
Give me, give me, some Gummy bear Dessert  
---------"Another Fruit Ninja hair DAY!"
Watermelon Taffy stuck on the top of my gums
Swallowing the whiteness in a whistle pop bar
I FELL LIKE A SWEET SUGAR STAR!!!

Glaze of glory erupts deep down my throat 24/7
Bubblicious, mint twist, Sunkist the best Twizzler breakfast
Yummy in my twinkie tummy, drooling over frosted flakes 
One more strawberry smoothie 44 oz cup   
Counting each and every Pez popping'' up
Goodnight light, 
It's time to get lost under the midnight moon pie sky
SELF- Huggin'' and snugglin'' to a new sugar rush high

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Shirley Candy February 8, 2023 at 6:59 PM I just drop by to this page because I missed you Linda.. I miss reading your sweet and supportive comments on everyone poem and tbh.. PS isnt the same without you..

Amanda Mawu August 3, 2016 at 12:29 PM Sooo delicious !!!

Kyle Kriticos June 29, 2016 at 9:47 PM Warning, this well written poem is the leading cause of diabetes on poetry soup! :P I was smiling with glee like a kid reading this and my eyes lit up more and more as it went on to the point where now I have to go drink an iced tea and get a sugar fix haha I had to stop buying EVERYTHING in anything bigger then a tiny package because I will eat all candy/sugar till its completely gone or i am sick its a proven fact :P Great write this took a lot of organization and clever wording!

Manmath Dalei April 28, 2016 at 6:20 AM Very beautiful fusion of words. Well titled poem with very nice concept. Very brilliant write. Truly impressive. I adore ur skill. It is my great pleasure to enjoy ur poems................loved always. Manmath.

James Marshall Goff April 10, 2016 at 7:09 AM Schneikies! Agreed, Linda! I hear moonpies come in different flavors now too! if only they weren't chemically flavored! Good one! Jimbo

Constance La France March 28, 2016 at 12:39 PM Linda, EXCELLENT, I got a sugar rush just reading this wonderfully written poem !

Kathleen Kroll March 19, 2016 at 4:30 PM I'm getting a sugar high just reading it. Love it

Debbie Duncan February 24, 2016 at 1:45 AM Love it :)

Vladislav Raven January 26, 2016 at 4:06 PM Sorry Linda, a seven and a gastronomic fave from me....Vladislav.

Vladislav Raven January 26, 2016 at 4:00 PM Hi Linda, i do it to myself, i read the name of the poem, i come in knowing that after reading this sweet treat i shall have to head for the kitchen. No self control, that's me. I Loved this sweet treat Linda. It just did read as a dream to me as i followed each line. I could just visualize..... Point me the way to the kitchen. Loved it Linda. Love....Vladislav.

Eve Roper December 10, 2015 at 9:34 AM This a wonderful musical sounding poem, Linda!

Criss Tripp September 18, 2015 at 9:47 AM Oh my god! You had me sold in the first and second verse. I love alliteration to the fullest, and your performance was the truest. Im not one to make comments on a popular trend, but this one i couldn't resist. Well done. Plus I have a sweet tooth as well.

Cherl Dunn September 16, 2015 at 10:10 PM Dear Linda This commit is easy, COOKIES ROCK FOREVER, CHERI

Darlene Gifford July 24, 2015 at 8:06 PM Yummy, a scrumptious write! You have fed me so well on sweets, so who needs supper now ? A 7. Thanks for visiting my fish poem.~~~Darlene

Maurice Yvonne April 8, 2015 at 1:30 PM I love your poetry on a sunny afternoon.

Cona Adams April 3, 2015 at 10:11 AM Love this. Boy, howdy, can I relate! My sonnet, "Potluck Dinner" won $100 in the annual "Burning the Midnight Oil" contest.

Shreya Priyadarshani March 28, 2015 at 4:55 AM Your Poem is so beautiful.. You write really well :) all your poems have a meaning,!! really it's astounding :)

Shreya Priyadarshani March 28, 2015 at 4:54 AM Your Poem is so beautiful.. You write really well :) all your poems have a meaning,!! really it's astounding :)

Tom Hitt March 16, 2015 at 1:26 PM I have given up refined sugar, so I suppose I'll have to imbibe vicariously through your sweet poem. ~T~

Shane Cooper March 9, 2015 at 3:45 AM An absolutley Truely Scrumptious delight that you have served up with this wonderful write. I think that if Hansel and Gretle knew what was on offer at your place the gingerbread house would have taken a big miss. Willy Wonka move over! I loved it from start to finish, just as well i am not a dentist. love Shane xxx

A. H. Sewell March 8, 2015 at 3:03 PM A fun, youthful write, PD. Thanks for sharing the sugar rush!

Jeffrey Dela Cruz February 22, 2015 at 2:44 AM A sludge of creativeness, sweet enough for me to be tempted to digest it more for my leisure. I love it. :)

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis February 20, 2015 at 11:51 AM Wonderfully written. I see treats galore, and more; but the point is, you're super creative, PD. Lovely weekend to you.

Marian Baker February 15, 2015 at 6:43 PM We certainly can indulge in your luscious picture poem. Thank you!

Kirsten Mackie February 2, 2015 at 6:56 AM Hi Linda, thank you for the warm welcome to poetry soup, I love this piece and look forward to reading more. I think I have already checked out your competition! I'll see what I can do ;) All the best, K

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