Sweet Sonnet Bird

When on the path of poetry I tread,
I rarely know the scenery I’ll find.
I hear a bird that sings inside my head
and measures steps iambic in my mind.

At times it seems a mountain that I climb.
I work but do not sweat. . . it’s more like play!
And each five steps I take, a word must rhyme
with one that’s ten feet farther on my way.

Although I often plod, I hate to rest;
I follow where sweet bird is wont to go
and often double back while on my quest
to find each turn of phrase most apropos.

But, oh, that words to match her melody
would come as swiftly as her song to me!

for the Which is your favorite poem form? Poetry Contest
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Parker Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 3:43 PM
Yes..sonnets..love them..congratulations on your win my poetic sonnet writing friend
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 2:25 PM
I knew you would choose a sonnet for the contest - many congrats on your win - i aspire to write sonnets like you, Craig and Frederic and many others, I still have much to learn:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. I also chose the Sonnet. Love the way you did yours. Hugs, Sandra
Sergi Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 12:32 PM
Hi Andrea: I love the way you use a bird as a Muse. Congratulations on your win.
Negron Flores Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations
Cheema Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 12:08 PM
Congrats Andrea! We love the Sonnet Bird! Love, Balveen
A  Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 11:49 AM
Andrea, awesome win. SKAT
Onclaud Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 10:33 AM
my guesses were etheree and trochee yet this stands out, andie... sweet congrats..huggs!
Nance Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 6:24 PM
Grats on your beautiful first place win :) Well done
Maverick Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 3:42 PM
I think you do well..' good to visit keep well Joe..'
Austin Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 2:12 PM
Would that you could lend to me that "Sweet Bird." I am so in awe. Most enlightened words I've ever heard. Unlike you, dear Andrea, I struggle to rhyme. Love, daver
Sirak Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 8:09 AM
Love it! congrats on your win. So creative...following the song of the sonnet bird to write your own.
May Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 9:51 PM
Beautiful write Andrea ..congrats on your win
Gibson Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 8:35 PM
I love this, Andrea...very beautiful write. Congratulations on your top win.
Lawless Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 6:29 PM
Oh, you devilish little bird, sitting on top of the tree.
Carroll Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 3:39 PM
This one sings Andrea!
Onclaud Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 3:35 PM
goodness, andie.. this is stunning..love every line and imagery!.. sweet congrats all the way!.. huggs
Anish Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 3:09 PM
Went to a nice reading on Saturday. I have poste your poetry on Twitter Poets House. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Horsman Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 11:32 AM
Another wonderful sonnet,,,,never could tire of such wondrous poetry..... your comment page as turn on to page two,,,and one hell of a task leaving a comment,,,managed after about 10 minutes.
Mandani Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 10:33 AM
Congrats. Well-deserved win!
M V Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 10:23 AM
It is a spontaneous overflow, Andrea. Well done. Congratulations on your deserved first place win!
Philibert Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 10:08 AM
a good write this, written with care...
Guzzi Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 9:43 AM
There's the sonneteer! Go Andie, congrad's Light & Love
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 7:04 AM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea am still in awe at this incredible write:-) Hugs jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 6:58 AM
Amazingly beautiful Andrea! Congrats on first place win!
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