Sweet Songs of Thanks

Birds
joyous
songs of praise
thank God for new
life.




Inspired by Brian Strands
As In Moments contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Rhinem Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 4:43 PM
"Hello Beautiful & Precious Robin!!!"~Smile~I just wanted to let You know that I just got Your comment~ Smile~And it made me "So Happy To Hear From 'You!!!!'"~Smile~"I Missed 'You' A Lot!!!!"~"Have A Beautiful Evening Beautiful Robin~My Love To 'You' Always, John!!!"~Bye Dear:)
Degenhardt Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 12:12 PM
Love this form and the beauty of the imagery you created with your words. Excellent writing. Michael
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January 26, 2009 at 12:36 PM
Amen! Love the message in this poem. Blessings to you for sharing it. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen
Mckenzie Avatar
January 18, 2009 at 9:40 AM
UH so lovely Congratulations on your win ! Love Laura :)
Heck Avatar
January 18, 2009 at 9:03 AM
Dear Robin - Congratulations on your WIN in Brian's contest! Peace and hugs, J
George   Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 4:00 PM
Hi Robin, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. This is a beautiful lanterne. Love and peace, Lainie
La France Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 12:43 PM
beautiful .. I really like it.. congratulations on your win.
Winter Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations Robin on your most excellent poem winning Second Place in Brian's contest! Way to go!!! Love, Shar xoxo
Richards Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 6:20 AM
Lovely poem, Robin...such an inspiring poem, and well deserved win in Brian's contest! Congratulations! ~ Carrie
Strand Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 3:02 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Robin.My Sonnet contest is now open.Rgds Brian
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 6:19 AM
Perfect title! Songs of praise indeed... super job Robin! Love, Keith
Reynolds Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 2:46 AM
I could noy agree more, birds and their songs truly let one know that spring has sprung!!! i love all these writes of spring! Love, Kristin
Haniff Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 1:04 PM
great lanterne, I love the format, seriously this is a winner...good luck in the contest! { thanx for the advice, I will}...Maryam
Higgins Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Love this piece Robin. Great wonders captured in these few lines. Thanks for the comments that are always so uplifting. Much love, Chris.
Gorelick Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 11:16 AM
Love his Robin, I love this short form. BG
Rhinem Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Smile~"I Love This Beautiful Thought Here Dear Precious & Gifted Robin!"~I hope that your New Year has been wonderfully well for You and Your loved ones dear lady! Smile~yes, the birds of metaphor....And "You Are A Robin Aren't You!"~Smile~So, whatever You do this year? Don't forget that thankfulness~for that brand new life! For it shall serve You well dear!! And hey, do Robins sing?~Smile~"Love To You Always~ And All You Love, John!":) I believe you have more? Let's go see....
Winter Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 10:00 AM
This is seriously beautiful. Good luck in the contest! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 7:57 AM
This is by far, in the top of Lanternes I've read, Robin. Wonderful and beautiful! Perfect little poem! ~ Love, Carrie
Strand Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 7:43 AM
Thank you for supporting my contests Robin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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