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Sweet Rhapsody

gentle spring rain fall
foliage kissed with ardor -
Oh sweet rhapsody

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Diane Locksley

Date: 9/9/2010 1:15:00 PM

I love the sound of the rain and the way it helps flowers grow. Great haiku!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2010 7:00:00 PM

Looking at this one again. I really love this one! See ya later, alligator!!

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/8/2010 12:15:00 AM

Spring IS that time. The 2nd line really puts the passion of spring in the Haiku. Nice write.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/7/2010 2:02:00 PM

Wilma hallo, baie mooi haiku! Na 'n paar keer is ek terug op Sop en ek het die aand het twee nuwe gedigte. Indien u by tye, maar ook met my in die Facebook, as jy wil. Lovely rhapsody you've penned here. I had a nice time with my visitors. They had to drive for 12 hours and were happy to have a brake at my place. Baie geluk en 'n lekker week ...:) Gert

James Fraser

Date: 9/7/2010 12:47:00 PM

Simply lovely Wilma, the images are pictured so well with your words >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2010 7:22:00 AM

wonderful, you can almost smell the frangrance, wilma!

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 9/7/2010 5:20:00 AM

very nice and thanks for your kind comments have a great day faleshia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/7/2010 3:38:00 AM

Enjoyed this Haiku..A little bit of Spring in Autumn..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/7/2010 12:18:00 AM

sweet rhapsody indeed, Ms. Neels ;) what a passionate haiku this is-- nikko :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/6/2010 6:28:00 PM

Fantastic imagery, Wilma. Thank you for your kind comments, always. Love, Audrey

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/6/2010 6:18:00 PM

gentle spring rain, Oh we wish here in Western Australia, hardly anything all of our winter, love your Haiku Wilma. Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/6/2010 3:10:00 PM

A "sweet rhapsody," indeed when the plants are blessed with rain, Wilma. I love your haiku and am glad you see "foliage" as having three syllables as well. I had a hard time convincing Rick of this. A pleasure to read your work always. Love, Carolyn