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Sweet Revenge

I was so angry His betrayal screamed through me Deafening my heart I yearned for revenge, but then Sweetest forgiveness soothed me September 26, 2019

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Date: 10/4/2019 6:32:00 PM
Hi Regina, In a few your poem showed the power of forgiveness. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/29/2019 7:54:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Regina. Janice
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Date: 9/29/2019 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving first placement Regina! xxoo
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:00:00 PM
Regina sweet poem and congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Date: 9/29/2019 11:51:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Regina :) - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/29/2019 11:39:00 AM
nicely penned, congrats on your win :) hugs
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Date: 9/29/2019 10:46:00 AM
This is great. Congrats on your top placement.
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Date: 9/29/2019 10:06:00 AM
I see this is a contest winner. Congratulations, sweetie.
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Date: 9/26/2019 8:09:00 PM
The right decision; for as long as we hold the anger, the pain remains. Excellent, honest write.
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Date: 9/26/2019 5:49:00 PM
Forgiveness is almost always the best way! Nicely expressed in this tanka, Regina. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 9/26/2019 5:29:00 PM
The best way to be good to yourself is to forgive others. Holding a grudge only hurts you. I think this is a wonderful message contained in your poem Regina. xxoo
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Date: 9/26/2019 5:24:00 PM
I'm glad you turned it into forgiveness, Regina!!
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Date: 9/26/2019 2:56:00 PM
It takes a very big person to arrive at forgiveness after having been cheated on. Only God can give that kind of strength, I enjoyed your poem, sending you blessing from my heart.
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Date: 9/26/2019 12:05:00 PM
Excellent Regina. When I'm angry I don't always think straight. I have to have a cooling off period so I try hard not to say anything until I do. The Bible tells us a soft answer turneth away wrath. So I have to pray, Lord please keep Your right hand on my shoulder and Your left hand over my mouth. Besides when you don't forgive you hurt yourself worse than the person you are mad at. Great Stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/26/2019 11:42:00 AM
Betrayal is so difficult to deal with .. what a lovely uplifting ending to the poem Regina:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/26/2019 11:40:00 AM
When you forgive, you must regret.
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Date: 9/26/2019 11:24:00 AM
Pefectly said Regina...forgiveness is the sweetest form of release.
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Date: 9/26/2019 8:46:00 AM
THANK GOD! I have had some thing's done to me, but I have done unequal pain towards another. Who am I not to forgive another special something or someone, including, myself continuing?
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Date: 9/26/2019 8:16:00 AM
If only for a moment...revenge don't die just lies...I love the write
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 9/26/2019 8:18:00 AM
Thank you so much... I am definitely a believer in forgiveness :) I have been forgiven for so much - by others and especially by God

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