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Sweet Rain

She lay on her bed, as the raindrops fell on her skin, being absorbed into her mind and soul. She could feel the absorbed raindrops turning to ocean tides within her body, while each of her cells exploded with bliss that felt like summer in the Caribbean. The raindrops fell where she felt more excited, eager for lovemaking, from morning to dawn. "I wish spring would feel like your rainy kisses," she whispered to his ear..... Date of Entry: 31/05/2017 Name of the Contest: A sexy surreal Sponsor: Lewis Raynes

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Date: 8/6/2017 6:51:00 AM
This is a winner Teddy, congrats. Love the ending, so sweet and sensual.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/7/2017 8:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Phil, for your kind applause and enjoying my work!! :-)
Date: 7/29/2017 5:32:00 PM
This is enchanting, Teddy, and exquisitely imaginative ... just love it! Congrats on your win - well-deserved!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/1/2017 4:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind applause, Greg!! :-) I really appreciate your visit to read and enjoy my work!! :-)
Date: 7/27/2017 11:11:00 PM
Yay! I am so glad to see this beauty on the winner's list. You already know how much I liked it. Congratulations Teddy!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2017 4:16:00 AM
I'm also glad you've read and applauded this same poem once again. I really appreciate it! *^_^*
Date: 7/27/2017 10:22:00 AM
Well done with this winning poem in John's contest, Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2017 4:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lin. I really appreciate it! *^_^*
Date: 7/27/2017 10:14:00 AM
Sensual & Beautiful! Congrats on your win, Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2017 4:11:00 AM
Hi Afzal. Thank you for your applause, and enjoying my piece! :)
Date: 7/27/2017 9:25:00 AM
Nice placement in my premium contest Teddy!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2017 4:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, John. It was a really awesome contest! :)
Date: 6/14/2017 2:18:00 AM
Deep, sensual write, Teddy. Very impressive! Congratulations on your win! Regards, John.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/17/2017 2:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, John!! :-) I really appreciate it!! :-)
Date: 6/12/2017 6:02:00 PM
There is something about rain that is so sensual I really enjoyed this beautiful poem Teddy. Congratulations on your top win! : )
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/13/2017 8:28:00 AM
Indeed, rain is something that spices romance. Thank you so much Connie, for your warm applause!! *^_^*
Date: 6/12/2017 12:30:00 PM
This is soooo good! Captivating.. well deserved win :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/13/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind applause, Lukas!! ;-)
Date: 6/12/2017 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Teddy! Hugs. Pandita
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/13/2017 8:07:00 AM
Hi Pandita. Thanks for passing by to read and applaud my work!! *^_^*
Date: 6/12/2017 6:36:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/13/2017 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Joseph!! ;-)
Date: 5/31/2017 7:31:00 AM
Really nice Teddy. Very sensual and alluring.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/1/2017 6:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris, for enjoying my poem!! ;-)

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