Teddy Kimathi Poet Free verse

Sweet Rain

She lay on her bed,
as the raindrops fell on her skin,
being absorbed into her mind
and soul. She could feel the absorbed
raindrops turning to ocean tides
within her body,
while each of her cells exploded with bliss
that felt like summer in the Caribbean.
The raindrops fell where she felt more excited,
eager for lovemaking,
from morning to dawn.
"I wish spring would feel like your rainy kisses,"
she whispered to his ear.....



Date of Entry: 31/05/2017

Name of the Contest: A sexy surreal

Sponsor: Lewis Raynes

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Phil Capitano August 6, 2017 at 6:51 AM This is a winner Teddy, congrats. Love the ending, so sweet and sensual. Teddy Kimathi August 7, 2017 at 8:23 AM Thank you so much Phil, for your kind applause and enjoying my work!! :-)

Gregory Richard Barden July 29, 2017 at 5:32 PM This is enchanting, Teddy, and exquisitely imaginative ... just love it! Congrats on your win - well-deserved! Teddy Kimathi August 1, 2017 at 4:44 PM Thank you so much for your kind applause, Greg!! :-) I really appreciate your visit to read and enjoy my work!! :-)

Connie Marcum Wong July 27, 2017 at 11:11 PM Yay! I am so glad to see this beauty on the winner's list. You already know how much I liked it. Congratulations Teddy! Teddy Kimathi July 28, 2017 at 4:16 AM I'm also glad you've read and applauded this same poem once again. I really appreciate it! *^_^*

Lin Lane July 27, 2017 at 10:22 AM Well done with this winning poem in John's contest, Teddy. Teddy Kimathi July 28, 2017 at 4:14 AM Thank you so much, Lin. I really appreciate it! *^_^*

Afzal Nusker July 27, 2017 at 10:14 AM Sensual & Beautiful! Congrats on your win, Teddy. Teddy Kimathi July 28, 2017 at 4:11 AM Hi Afzal. Thank you for your applause, and enjoying my piece! :)

John Hamilton July 27, 2017 at 9:25 AM Nice placement in my premium contest Teddy! Teddy Kimathi July 28, 2017 at 4:09 AM Thank you so much, John. It was a really awesome contest! :)

John Michaels June 14, 2017 at 2:18 AM Deep, sensual write, Teddy. Very impressive! Congratulations on your win! Regards, John. Teddy Kimathi June 17, 2017 at 2:01 AM Thank you so much, John!! :-) I really appreciate it!! :-)

Connie Marcum Wong June 12, 2017 at 6:02 PM There is something about rain that is so sensual I really enjoyed this beautiful poem Teddy. Congratulations on your top win! : ) Teddy Kimathi June 13, 2017 at 8:28 AM Indeed, rain is something that spices romance. Thank you so much Connie, for your warm applause!! *^_^*

Lukas Ficklin June 12, 2017 at 12:30 PM This is soooo good! Captivating.. well deserved win :) Teddy Kimathi June 13, 2017 at 8:26 AM Thanks so much for your kind applause, Lukas!! ;-)

Pandita Sietesantos June 12, 2017 at 12:22 PM Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Teddy! Hugs. Pandita Teddy Kimathi June 13, 2017 at 8:07 AM Hi Pandita. Thanks for passing by to read and applaud my work!! *^_^*

Joseph May June 12, 2017 at 6:36 AM Congrats on a fine win Teddy Teddy Kimathi June 13, 2017 at 8:06 AM Thank you so much, Joseph!! ;-)

Chris Green May 31, 2017 at 7:31 AM Really nice Teddy. Very sensual and alluring. Teddy Kimathi June 1, 2017 at 6:22 AM Thank you so much Chris, for enjoying my poem!! ;-)