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Sweet Potato Pie and Pumpkin Pie

sweet potato pie and pumpkin pie no whipped cream....just familial purity the sun crisp on the skin despite the similarly crisp chill innocence endless like wind chimes with perfect pitch everybody influential is alive, healthy, and well no tombstone or 'wish you were here' teardrops no football games in man caves for that session is closed no petty arguments or questions of rank and attention just sweet potato pie and pumpkin pie some whipped cream....familial purity still intact....i miss that....

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Date: 8/16/2014 10:02:00 PM
that last line said it all. Love your way of styling this one.
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Marty King
Date: 8/20/2014 2:00:00 PM
Thank you for all the comments on my creations. I enjoy reading all the comments. Please continue to check my stuff out!

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