Eileen Manassian Poet Senryu

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Sweet Oblivion

we're so out of touch
there's no life outside our sphere~~~
hands touching bodies

time hushes to hear
expressions of love's longing~~~
nothing else exists

surging while merging:
two bodies becoming one~~~
sweet oblivion

Eileen Manassian

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Funom Makama May 20, 2016 at 6:51 AM Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.

Richard Lamoureux May 11, 2016 at 8:29 AM Some great comments Eileen.

Demetrios Trifiatis May 10, 2016 at 8:01 AM Tenderly romantic! Absolutely wonderful Senryu dear, Eileen! A seven!

Charmaine Chircop May 9, 2016 at 2:54 PM Indeed sweet..So very sweet..: ). Nine days morenand its your Birthday : ) HoorAy.

Mama Bear May 8, 2016 at 6:54 PM Nothing like love Glad to see you write about what matters to you Hope you got all the love you deserve for Mother's Day Hugs Edith Our birthdays are coming up Are you ready to party? Eileen Manassian May 9, 2016 at 11:20 AM Hello, dear one. My birthday isn't a happy one this year. My husband is away in the States and my daughter in Hungry. I'm all alone. :( I hope you have a great Bday celebration! You deserve it. Thanks for being who you are...and for your friendship. Hugs

Robert Pettit May 8, 2016 at 6:04 PM Very romantic verses. A definite turn-on. Eileen Manassian May 9, 2016 at 11:20 AM Thank you, Robert. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2016 at 5:22 PM very romantic poetry. I loved the rhyming effect in that last one. Very nice, sweet Eileen. Happy Mother's Day to you. Eileen Manassian May 9, 2016 at 11:20 AM Thanks, Andrea. Hope all is well, dear. Glad to have you pass by...Hugs

Aurore Severo May 8, 2016 at 4:49 PM So romantically sweet and beautiful words, xoxoxo Eileen Manassian May 9, 2016 at 11:21 AM Thanks, Aurore. Glad to have you visit.

Paul Callus May 8, 2016 at 3:40 PM All three senryu are to my liking, Eileen; they follow a pattern which traces a touch, go and flow transition. hugs // paul Eileen Manassian May 8, 2016 at 4:15 PM :) Touch...go...and flow...Lovely, my dear. Hugs

Arthur Vaso May 7, 2016 at 6:32 PM That sounds a lot like me and ice cream! :) loved this! Charmaine Chircop May 9, 2016 at 2:53 PM :) Eileen Manassian May 8, 2016 at 9:12 AM ;) You ARE a naughty one, aren't you! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux May 7, 2016 at 10:59 AM Enjoying the morning ooh la la hotness! Have a great weekend, hugs Rick. Eileen Manassian May 8, 2016 at 9:13 AM I'm glad you did, dear. I just wanted to write a passionate one....Hugs

Connie Marcum Wong May 6, 2016 at 2:16 PM Your poem took me back to those all consuming days of fun and joyous lustful, loving times which you captured so beautifully in your poem Eileen. #7 ; ) Eileen Manassian May 8, 2016 at 9:17 AM Thanks, Connie. You are so kind to me. I'm glad you liked this senry string. Hugs, dear.

Laura Leiser May 6, 2016 at 12:34 AM That's "lingers" in the mind!

Laura Leiser May 6, 2016 at 12:31 AM Sublime and sensuous write, Eileen. It lbgers in the mind...! Eileen Manassian May 8, 2016 at 9:18 AM :) Thank you, Laura. You are very sweet. I'm glad you dropped by to visit. I have missed your upbeat and positive remarks. Will visit you soon, dear. Hugs

Ilene Bauer May 5, 2016 at 6:04 PM great poem, eileen! very beautiful... Eileen Manassian May 8, 2016 at 3:03 PM Thanks, dear. I'm glad you liked it. Happy Mother's Day to you!

Casarah Nance May 5, 2016 at 5:41 PM Oh perfect harmony of two! :) Very nice :) Eileen Manassian May 8, 2016 at 3:03 PM Thank you, dear. :)