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we're so out of touch there's no life outside our sphere~~~ hands touching bodies time hushes to hear expressions of love's longing~~~ nothing else exists surging while merging: two bodies becoming one~~~ sweet oblivion Eileen Manassian

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/20/2016 6:51:00 AM

Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/11/2016 8:29:00 AM

Some great comments Eileen.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/10/2016 8:01:00 AM

Tenderly romantic! Absolutely wonderful Senryu dear, Eileen! A seven!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/9/2016 2:54:00 PM

Indeed sweet..So very sweet..: ). Nine days morenand its your Birthday : ) HoorAy.

Mama Bear

Date: 5/8/2016 6:54:00 PM

Nothing like love Glad to see you write about what matters to you Hope you got all the love you deserve for Mother's Day Hugs Edith Our birthdays are coming up Are you ready to party?

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2016 11:20:00 AM

Hello, dear one. My birthday isn't a happy one this year. My husband is away in the States and my daughter in Hungry. I'm all alone. :( I hope you have a great Bday celebration! You deserve it. Thanks for being who you are...and for your friendship. Hugs

Robert Pettit

Date: 5/8/2016 6:04:00 PM

Very romantic verses. A definite turn-on.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2016 11:20:00 AM

Thank you, Robert. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2016 5:22:00 PM

very romantic poetry. I loved the rhyming effect in that last one. Very nice, sweet Eileen. Happy Mother's Day to you.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2016 11:20:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Hope all is well, dear. Glad to have you pass by...Hugs

Aurore Severo

Date: 5/8/2016 4:49:00 PM

So romantically sweet and beautiful words, xoxoxo

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2016 11:21:00 AM

Thanks, Aurore. Glad to have you visit.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/8/2016 3:40:00 PM

All three senryu are to my liking, Eileen; they follow a pattern which traces a touch, go and flow transition. hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2016 4:15:00 PM

:) Touch...go...and flow...Lovely, my dear. Hugs

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/7/2016 6:32:00 PM

That sounds a lot like me and ice cream! :) loved this!

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/9/2016 2:53:00 PM

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2016 9:12:00 AM

;) You ARE a naughty one, aren't you! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/7/2016 10:59:00 AM

Enjoying the morning ooh la la hotness! Have a great weekend, hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2016 9:13:00 AM

I'm glad you did, dear. I just wanted to write a passionate one....Hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/6/2016 2:16:00 PM

Your poem took me back to those all consuming days of fun and joyous lustful, loving times which you captured so beautifully in your poem Eileen. #7 ; )

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2016 9:17:00 AM

Thanks, Connie. You are so kind to me. I'm glad you liked this senry string. Hugs, dear.

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/6/2016 12:34:00 AM

That's "lingers" in the mind!

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/6/2016 12:31:00 AM

Sublime and sensuous write, Eileen. It lbgers in the mind...!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2016 9:18:00 AM

:) Thank you, Laura. You are very sweet. I'm glad you dropped by to visit. I have missed your upbeat and positive remarks. Will visit you soon, dear. Hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/5/2016 6:04:00 PM

great poem, eileen! very beautiful...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2016 3:03:00 PM

Thanks, dear. I'm glad you liked it. Happy Mother's Day to you!

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/5/2016 5:41:00 PM

Oh perfect harmony of two! :) Very nice :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/8/2016 3:03:00 PM

Thank you, dear. :)