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Sweet Nothings

Sweet Nothings. Kisses are as sweet as candy The feelings last longer too. Caresses are sweet beyond compare Especially with you. Candy full of bubbles, Is a hollow empty shell You in my arms is the sweetest, That’s what they should sell. Candy cannot touch The sweetness of your loving kiss All the chocolate in the world I would rather miss. It is nothing compared to The warmth of your sweet caress If you were a bar of chocolate, You would melt and be a mess. Who needs candy or chocolate bars, The taste gone in just a minute. But it can give me some pleasure Especially if you're wrapped in it. ~GG~ 2012

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Date: 12/1/2014 11:45:00 AM
trawling through an oldie or two,,,clever poetry is this...
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/19/2014 9:04:00 AM
Bless you xx
Date: 6/6/2014 11:43:00 AM
your title says it all, the quality of this wonderful poem as always, a profound message, which has the reader, in a spin for many reason...
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Date: 9/24/2012 1:43:00 PM
wonderful write Mandy....thanks for stopping by...love...Joseph
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Date: 9/23/2012 6:13:00 AM
Full of romance of tasty Candy lovely worded. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/23/2012 4:59:00 AM
Beautiful...It sounds like love! Cynthia
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/23/2012 5:07:00 AM
ooh if only........xx
Date: 9/22/2012 2:20:00 PM
just love this one, Mandy - I was grinning at the last line : )
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Date: 9/23/2012 5:08:00 AM
Glad about that Jack that is what I try for .... the last line xx
Date: 9/21/2012 12:50:00 PM
The correct spelling of David's word below is "aphrodisiac". In this writing, you have described "sweet nothings" as well as Brenda Lee.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/21/2012 1:05:00 PM
Thanks Robert what a compliment and thanks for the translation xx
Date: 9/21/2012 11:17:00 AM
THEY SAY CHOCOLATE IS AN IVERDISIACK DONT KNOW IF SPELT RIGHT I AGREE KISSING SOMEONES MUCH BETTER DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 9/20/2012 7:41:00 AM
very sweet and not nothing at all ;) good ending! soupmail
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/20/2012 7:43:00 AM
checked mail but nothing there sweetie will check again in 10 mins xx
Date: 9/20/2012 6:41:00 AM
Ahhh! So romantic..Great to love and appreciate someone in such a special way..Enjoyed reading this morn..Now I am not so sure about giving up the chocolate..Sara
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/20/2012 7:02:00 AM
I actually don't like chocolate Sara, give me a savoury any day. xx
Date: 9/20/2012 6:33:00 AM
Sweet and delicious... Nice poem... Terry
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Date: 9/20/2012 5:56:00 AM
like this, love how you intertwine 2 or more subjects in to a poem.. is this an old one revamped, i know i do that often.. love your blonde blog.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/20/2012 6:12:00 AM
yes its is revamped and for a reason xx

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