Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Poet Quatrain

Sweet Nothings

Sweet Nothings.

Kisses are as sweet as candy
The feelings last longer too.
Caresses are sweet beyond compare
Especially with you.

Candy full of bubbles,
Is a hollow empty shell
You in my arms is the sweetest,
That’s what they should sell.

Candy cannot touch
The sweetness of your loving kiss
All the chocolate in the world
I would rather miss.

It is nothing compared to
The warmth of your sweet caress
If you were a bar of chocolate,
You would melt and be a mess.

Who needs candy or chocolate bars,
The taste gone in just a minute.
But it can give me some pleasure 
Especially if you're wrapped in it.

~GG~ 2012

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Harry Horsman December 1, 2014 at 11:45 AM trawling through an oldie or two,,,clever poetry is this... Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 19, 2014 at 9:04 AM Bless you xx

Harry Horsman June 6, 2014 at 11:43 AM your title says it all, the quality of this wonderful poem as always, a profound message, which has the reader, in a spin for many reason...

Joseph May September 24, 2012 at 1:43 PM wonderful write Mandy....thanks for stopping by...love...Joseph

Bl Devnath September 23, 2012 at 6:13 AM Full of romance of tasty Candy lovely worded. Loved always, bl

Cynthia Alvez September 23, 2012 at 4:59 AM Beautiful...It sounds like love! Cynthia Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 23, 2012 at 5:07 AM ooh if only........xx

Jack Horne September 22, 2012 at 2:20 PM just love this one, Mandy - I was grinning at the last line : ) Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 23, 2012 at 5:08 AM Glad about that Jack that is what I try for .... the last line xx

Robert Pettit September 21, 2012 at 12:50 PM The correct spelling of David's word below is "aphrodisiac". In this writing, you have described "sweet nothings" as well as Brenda Lee. Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 21, 2012 at 1:05 PM Thanks Robert what a compliment and thanks for the translation xx

David Scott September 21, 2012 at 11:17 AM THEY SAY CHOCOLATE IS AN IVERDISIACK DONT KNOW IF SPELT RIGHT I AGREE KISSING SOMEONES MUCH BETTER DAVIDSCOTT

Black Eyed Susan September 20, 2012 at 7:41 AM very sweet and not nothing at all ;) good ending! soupmail Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 20, 2012 at 7:43 AM checked mail but nothing there sweetie will check again in 10 mins xx

Sara Kendrick September 20, 2012 at 6:41 AM Ahhh! So romantic..Great to love and appreciate someone in such a special way..Enjoyed reading this morn..Now I am not so sure about giving up the chocolate..Sara Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 20, 2012 at 7:02 AM I actually don't like chocolate Sara, give me a savoury any day. xx

Terry O'Leary September 20, 2012 at 6:33 AM Sweet and delicious... Nice poem... Terry

Harry Horsman September 20, 2012 at 5:56 AM like this, love how you intertwine 2 or more subjects in to a poem.. is this an old one revamped, i know i do that often.. love your blonde blog. Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 20, 2012 at 6:12 AM yes its is revamped and for a reason xx