Deb Wilson Poet Senryu

Sweet Love Song

love is fresh and new
   but grows strong like an oak tree
      sweet shade in the sun

foundation of trust
   hearts and souls given freely
       thoughts that live as one

kisses like nectar
   skin to skin and arm in arm
      song sung endlessly

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 10:36 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Deb. Love, Carol

Deirdre Omaidin February 18, 2011 at 7:56 AM fabulous words, congrats. Déirdre

Michael J. Falotico February 18, 2011 at 4:47 AM I love your poem and I love sharing 2nd place with you!! congrats my dear...love Michael

Dr Hitendra Mehta February 17, 2011 at 11:56 PM Many Congrats Deb for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George February 17, 2011 at 11:30 PM Beautiful Senryu, dear Deb. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Robert A. Dufresne February 17, 2011 at 4:22 PM that's really cool Deb. I like it lots. Congratulations well deserved win

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2011 at 1:54 PM This was yet another lovely one, and I enjoyed reading it, Deb. Congratulations.

Kash Poet February 17, 2011 at 10:35 AM Wonderful sweet love song,Deb!Congrats on your win-----kashinath

Wilma Neels February 17, 2011 at 10:05 AM Absolutely beautiful Deb, congratulations on your awesome win in Linda's contest, love Wilma

Sharon Ruebel February 17, 2011 at 9:30 AM Hello Deb, Well done, this is beautiful and it goes into my favorites. I love this Congratulations on your win Lov, Shar

Audrey Haick February 17, 2011 at 9:19 AM Congratulations on your fantastic 2nd place win in the contest, Deb. Love, Annalise

Nette Onclaud February 16, 2011 at 8:47 PM sweetness it is, deb!! CHEERS for the great win..:) hugs, nette

Tahera Mannan February 16, 2011 at 7:47 PM A beautiful Song. Many congrats for this huge win.

John Freeman February 16, 2011 at 6:55 PM Deb, Good to see you at the top. Agape, Moses

Robert Pettit February 16, 2011 at 6:25 PM These are three superb senryu entries, Deb. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 16, 2011 at 5:45 PM Congratulations on the second place winin the contest of Linda, Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2011 at 5:24 PM Congrats Deb on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your support always...

Sara Kendrick February 6, 2011 at 12:31 PM Good luck in the contest with this very passionate work..Reads like winners' circle to me..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta February 2, 2011 at 6:13 PM Nice multiple senryu with nice theme, deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 2, 2011 at 5:51 AM thankxx for supporting my current contest Deb... good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer luv.