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Sweet Fragrance of Spring

. Grandma's vase waiting on Mother's lace table cloth for lilacs to bloom _____________________ Inspired by Carol Brown's Haiku Waiting for Spring contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/16/2018 10:24:00 PM

Lovely and I love lilacs. Beautiful, Carrie.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/9/2010 5:43:00 AM

hot one

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2010 5:08:00 PM

LOVE THIS ONE, carrie, congratulations!

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/4/2010 9:27:00 PM

HEEEEEEEEEEEELLLlllllow Carrie ! I've missed you guys here on the soup.. man this is a great poem. your words are always a fresh breathe to take!!!! very nice haiku my dear.

Sue Mason

Date: 2/3/2010 9:53:00 AM

I would have placed this higher but since it wasn't my contest ... LOL ... anyway, I LOVE this one!! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest, Carrie ...

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/2/2010 11:38:00 PM

Nice Haiku! Carrie! Congrats on your success in Carol's contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Danny Nunn

Date: 1/29/2010 7:06:00 PM

What a way to describe the springs past and now..good write..Thanks on "You Can Run"..glad that you liked it..Danny

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 1/28/2010 8:00:00 AM

It is wonderful when we remember and cherish those things passed from one generation to the next. What a brilliant Haiku. Mac

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 1/27/2010 5:23:00 PM

I like this one a lot. It reads like an old novel rad by the fireplace. Thank you for you kind remarks. Regards, Gerard.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2010 11:24:00 AM

Great Haiku that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 1/27/2010 8:01:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/27/2010 5:33:00 AM

very thought provoking poem, nicely penned.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2010 7:49:00 PM

Lovely visual Carrie and great entry for the contest Carol is sponsoring.. good luck with this beauty... my entry is Softly Springing.. luv these contest competitions... beautiful words for my very own memories... luv.. Linda-Marie

John Freeman

Date: 1/26/2010 6:39:00 PM

Worthy of a front rwo position in this contest, I would say Carrie. Awe-inspiring Haiku. per your comment, Dad, the last of a dying breed I am afraid. However, we are the better of those whom sholders we stand on. Thanks for your prose in your comment, Sincerely,love, Moses

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/26/2010 6:16:00 PM

a good place for lace and lilacs. my vision is my grand mothers. john

Sue Mason

Date: 1/26/2010 4:26:00 PM

..... and the winner is!!! THIS IS IT ... smile ... what an awesome write you've done. Lilacs water was my Grandmother's favorite splash ... great to "hear" from you always ...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/26/2010 3:08:00 PM

Thank you for your entry into my contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2010 1:13:00 PM

Carrie, you should do so well with this one! LOve it. Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/26/2010 1:02:00 PM

I enjoyed this description of your "Lilac memories," Carrie. Unfortunately, my grandmother only had a bowl filled with plastic fruit. Not much to inspire a write such as yours! Excellent, meaningful haiku. Love, carolyn

P Sheart

Date: 1/26/2010 12:39:00 PM

Hi Carrie, It's amazing how something can trigger a memory! My grandmother planted a Lilac bush in front yard because that's my birth flower. She too would fill it with Lilac's. It always made me feel special and loved. I love this Haiku. Going into my favorites! This will make a lovely entry into Carol's contest. Best of luck sweet! Love Light Patty

Tobey Hill

Date: 1/26/2010 12:27:00 PM

This brought me memories of my grandmother, and her lilac bushes, and spring..Thank you Carrie...TAH

Susan Mills

Date: 1/26/2010 12:27:00 PM

Graceful! Thank you! -Susan Mills