Sweet Emotions

Cascading waves wash ashore, tickling toes, as they ebb and flow: while moonbeams set a trillion jewels sparkling upon the shoal. Smiles summon sweet emotions, while we stroll upon the beach, hand in hand under a starry sky: pausing to build castles in the sand. And in this state of blissfulness: two lonely souls unite, for all eternity. When hopes and tears are willingly shared, trust: defines the essence of caring. Yet, love offers so much more; facilitating fantasies, and fulfilling dreams. Agony and ecstasy meld with each ardent kiss. And I am consumed by passion's flame: having never felt love, as intense as this.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations on this winning work for the contest. It is a good work and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. Sara
Pinet Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 3:18 PM
Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 9:50 PM
Very romantic. A most deserved win, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Thanks so much Line, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Smith Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Lovely, romantic piece Emile, congratulations...
Pinet Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 4:00 PM
Thanks so much Charlie, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Raven Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 6:37 PM
Hi Emile, this is an excellent write, your words sing. Congratulations on your first place win. Words too touch the heart and make it sing with joy. Going into my faves....Mike.
Pinet Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Thank you Vladislav, you have brought a smile to my day my friend. Emile.
Allison Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 3:37 PM
An absolute romantic gem am add I g it to my faves emile :-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Thanks so much Jan, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Wolf Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 11:21 AM
Desire, beautifully expressed. The flame of love's desire lit up the last stanza for me. Ecstasy! Hats off to you on your first-place trophy, Emile. Best wishes, Gershon
Pinet Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 12:55 PM
Thanks so much Gershon, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 7:03 AM
This poem shines in the glow of love Emile! Congratulations on your wonderful first placement! : )
Pinet Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thanks so much Connie, you continue to be one of my biggest fans and I'm so appreciative my friend, Emile.
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 5:24 AM
oh Emile, how passionate and romantic! you have such a way with words dear poet...thank you and congrats : )-luloo
Pinet Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Thanks so much Laura, I am pleased with the win and as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:29 PM
Wonderful write Emile, congrats on a fine win!
Pinet Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Thanks John, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 9:01 PM
Lovely! Congrats, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 7:28 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Onclaud Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 10:14 AM
this is a flowing symphony of love's delight...a pleasure to read you again, emile... if for contest, winning wishes!.. huggs
Pinet Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 12:54 PM
Thank you Nette, you have brought a smile to my day my friend. Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 1:42 PM
This is simply superb writing Emile, loved every word, felt the imagery, emotions portrayed. Give us more of this, this is excellent!
Pinet Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Thanks so much my friend, your words bring joy to my heart. Emile.
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