Sweet Disturbances -Potw

In the mid of my garden I sat on my fav chair to pen Scents of newly bloomed flora Bestowed metaphors plethora Yes, let us pen, Said my brain... When I was about to pen Gorgeous gomprehanas grinned Oh! Those dancing violet crowns They're the princesses enthroned??? "So what, you pen!!!" Said my brain again I meditated, words amassed; Took a note, ideas blasted But brisk babblers suddenly crossed Shouted, spoke and Sang verses long My poetic thoughts they looted to jolly along O! I couldn't help, my dear brain Again I sat down, closed my eyes, Took a deep breath; Mesmerized by the rhythmic breeze; Then, a grasshopper stepped into the scene His piercing song tore my mind's screen And the ideas lingering awhile were cleaned Sweet disturbances they're Won't let us write or read But not to be hated As they make us breath the happy air Bloody sweet disturbances they're The Rationale behind our smiling faces
Feb 15 2023
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Proxenos Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 1:08 PM
POEM OF THE WEEK and so justified was Poetry Soup for choosing this gem - congratulations my friend - may the garden always inspire you - i love being in the garden writing poetry and i loved the interruption of the grasshopper. Wonderful poetry, outstanding! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 7:09 AM
Excellent and entertaining write SWEET DISTURBANCES POTW. Perfect Imagery. We should all be disturbed in this manner. Enjoy! VBR black panther
Fowler Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 7:52 AM
This is amazingly beautiful in its contemplative nature Supraja. Belated congratulations on your well-deserved POTW! :)
Edmonds  Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 2:21 AM
Lovely Supraja, the garden is the place to be, even though sweet disturbances take the muse from thee. Congratulations on poem of the week… Belle
Pandit Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 7:52 AM
BIG congrats on POTW, Supraja. Deserving of all the accolades!
Kannan Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Thank you so much... Thanks for your fav and continuous support... It means a lot to me....
Meadows Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 11:39 PM
It is nice to be outside in the garden and to see the lovely nature. A good poem. Well done.
Kannan Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 8:21 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanette... Glad you liked it...
Kitchin Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 5:16 AM
Supraja. I loved your garden journey, congratulations on POTW!
Kannan Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 9:17 PM
Thank you so much, Tania.... Glad you liked it...
Nicole Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 6:22 PM
Nature is very inspiring, beyond being beautiful and breathtaking. I'm "mesmerized by the rhythmic breeze," and the tender touch of your words. Congratulations Supraja, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kannan Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 9:17 PM
True that,nature is quite inspiring... So glad you liked this and Thank you so much for your lovely wishes...
La France Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 5:37 PM
Supraja, your poem is so beautiful, and congratulations on receiving THE POEM OF THE WEEK, honor, blessings, Constance
Kannan Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 9:16 PM
Thank you so much, Constance... So glad you liked it... It was totally unexpected and I feel so honoured and blessed to receive POTW honour.... Thanks a lot for your lovely wishes.. l
Baker Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 7:52 AM
So poeticly express, Supraja. Your imagery was cativating. The pace of the poem moved smoothly and each line connected well with the next. Thank you for sharing this lovely thought through your poetry. Congratulations on your POTW honor! Enjoy your special attention. A poet friend in Texas, Bill A FAV for my list!
Kannan Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 9:14 PM
Thank you so much, Bill ... So glad you liked this...Thanks for letting me know the POTW honours.... I didn't expect that...
Pandit Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 7:49 AM
I like the tenor of your poem, Supraja--contemplating amid nature. Poetic inspiration resonates throughout. A FAVE for me.
Kannan Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 9:13 PM
Thank you so much.... So glad you liked it and many thanks for the fav ... It means a lot to me....
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 5:13 AM
A writer's haven~out in nature letting nature lead them into writing about the day. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Kannan Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 9:13 PM
Thank you so much Sara.... Glad you liked it...
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