Sweet Christmas Wreath

A pretty Christmas wreath I’ve fashioned, and it’s very sweet;
Sweet like you, my special one, because it’s even more. . . 
More than just a wreath, it’s candy coated, made to eat!
Eat from it, my darling man. Don’t hang it on your door!

Your door does not require this wreath with chocolates replete;
replete with caramels, mints and gumdrops, too, placed on this ring.
This ring of homemade goodness to entice you, dear, I bring.
I bring it now, for next to you, there’s no one else as sweet!


Inspired by Dr. Ram Mehta's "Christmas Wreath" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Onclaud Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 12:59 AM
taking it to the top! congrats, andrea..:) nette
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 4:33 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations on your win Abdrea in the "Christmas Wreath" contest by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol
Duffin Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 7:59 AM
Hi Andrea. Heartiest congratulations on your success with this fine piece. Beautiful but fattening , hey, who cares. joy and peace to you Eamon
Cwiak Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 5:49 AM
Wonderful sentiment, Andrea. Congrats on your 1st place win. Dan C
Mehta Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 9:41 PM
Many Congrats Andrea for clinching top spot in this difficult yet interesting form of Dr Rams contest. Best wishes/Luv...Hitendra Mehta
Neels Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:25 AM
I also want one ;-) congratulations on your 1st place win Andrea and thanks for the smiles.. Love Wilma
Villarosa Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 10:06 PM
A very unique Christmas Wreath made of sweet, it brings ever hoping this kind of celebration. Congratulations, Andrea on a well deserved win on this contest. (^_^) Noel.
Mannan Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 8:34 PM
Too good, yummy. many congratulations once again Andrea.
Richards Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 6:07 PM
Yummy sweet poem!!! Good enough to eat!! Congrats Andrea on your number 1 spot!!
Guzzi Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:39 PM
LOL I bet he loved all that candy! Nice win. Congrad's Light & Love
Devonshire Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:19 PM
Knew this would be a winner. Congratulations, Andrea! Best wishes, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:17 PM
Congratulations Andrea on thei different kind of wreath and your big no. 1 win. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Congratulations on your top honor! Andrea, on your candy coated, made to eat with home made goodness wreath. Good job! Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 3:50 PM
Congrats Andrea on your first place win in Dr. Ram's wreath contest with this lovely entry my friend.. happy to be sharing first with u luv.. enjoy..
Mehta Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 3:27 PM
Congratulations, Adrea, for the first place in my contest sharing with Linda and Carolyn.
Villarosa Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 10:36 PM
Very impressive display of your sweet Christmas Wreath, Andrea. Regarding my poem Christmas wreath, it did not reach the cut-off submission, so it's just for sharing only. Appreciate your kind comment. Good luck to you on this contest. (^_^) Noel.
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 1:58 PM
What a terrific read Andrea it makes me want a sweet.My poem is not enter in the contest.Appreciate the thought of entering it though.Thanks so much for your caring comment.Your friend Teresa
Austin Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 12:51 PM
Let's hope your man is as fond of romance as he is of eating sweets or he may satiate himself to the point of sleep. Very sweet poem, dear sweet Andrea. Love, Dave
Sweetheart Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 12:33 PM
Oh how sweet Andrea to pen this for the luv of your life .. and presenting it so invitingly luv.. good luck in the contest having met Dr. Ram's challenge.. I did too however my title escapes me at the moment... Ron is breathing down my neck..haha..
Locksley Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 12:01 PM
If your "darling man" doesn't want a chocolate wreath, please send it to me! Good luck in the contest, Andrea.
Devonshire Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 10:41 PM
Aww...that's really "sweet," Andrea. Hope this delectable treat ranks high in the contest! Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 2:05 PM
Wonderful Andrea, I loved it, it is just so sweet, and so uplifting, best of luck in the contest~~
Haick Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 11:38 AM
Poor Mimi...lost and alone..maybe if she'll accept the love offered she won't feel so bad?! Not need to hide?! Great Christmas Wreath, dear Andrea..keep love alive as it is the light that no one can douse!! Love ya, girl! Audrey
Peranteau Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 11:07 AM
Great write Andrea ! If that wreath don't drag'm in, I guess he'll have to settle for cookies and milk ! *smiles* much love, james
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