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Sweet Childhood Memories

"recently scenes of early life have stolen into my mind, like breezes blown ..." Quote by _Samuel Taylor Coleridge (from his writings) I fondly recall the innocent days of my childhood, playing hide and seek among the backyard boxwood, and life as I knew it then was sweet and good. Country life was always fun. I treasured Christmas tree lights glowing in the dark, family gatherings each summer in Audubon Park. In my younger years I was as carefree as a lark, enjoying days in the sun. With my little sister beside me we made mud pies and didn't see anything wrong with little white lies or that dancing like ballerinas in the rain wasn't wise until our pirouettes were done. I enjoyed having an allowance that I could spend and sharing whispered secrets with my best friend, wishing our playing time outside would never end. How I loved to run! In sweet memories I recall swimming in the lake, helping Mom in the kitchen when she would bake, and eating more icing than I had put on the cake. Having fights with a water gun. How wonderful were my days spent as a child, Dad called me a tomboy because I was a bit wild. I was happy and content with life, always beguiled with everything I'd done. My braided pigtails were yanked by a silly boy in school. He giggled like an idiot thinking he was so cool, til I fought back with a fist and called him a 'stupid fool.' That battle I had won. If memory serves me well, I remember not liking boys. Always wanting their way and making too much noise. I preferred playing house with many of my stuffed toys. Boys were creatures to shun. I was very competitive and wanted to win every race, and didn't care much in those days about ladylike grace. I recall being angry with myself for falling flat on my face and not talking to anyone. I've photos of me since I was born and it's plain to see that my childhood was a very delightful time for me. With a loving family like mine, I grew up quite esprit. I love them all, a ton! October 8, 2022 - A Constance La France Contest Writing Challenge - Past Memories - "T" Forms Poetry

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Date: 11/12/2022 12:42:00 AM
Jenna, you have penned a beautiful Tail-rhyme with lovely memories and congratulations on your placement in my contest, Writing Challenge - Past Memories- "T" Forms, and of course I like the quote, and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, also, well done !
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Date: 11/4/2022 11:13:00 PM
Hi Jenna, Love to be here and reading this wonderful memories of your childhood in this Poetry, and a deserved POTD. Harry
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Date: 11/1/2022 2:59:00 AM
I do not know how I missed this POTD of yours. Might be owing to my short absence from the site. This is, indeed, a great masterpiece. Great memories, beautifully written in Tail-Rhyme. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/21/2022 2:24:00 AM
Congrats on POTD. I hope this shall be POTW. I loved not only the poem, but also the photo! Is that you? Wow! You have not changed much.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/1/2022 2:40:00 AM
No, it's not me, but I did look quite a bit like this child. Thank you, Caren.
Date: 10/12/2022 2:24:00 PM
Back with congrats on POTD!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/1/2022 2:40:00 AM
Many thanks, Kim.
Date: 10/11/2022 7:47:00 PM
Beautiful Jenna , I have so many wonderful memories of my childhood and I was a Tomboy as well climbing many a tree ! I love hearing about your childhood . It brings a smile to my face ! Xx Congratulations on POTD ! Hugs Susan :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2022 2:05:00 AM
Thank you for your gracious remarks, Susan.
Date: 10/11/2022 6:13:00 PM
Ah, wonderful childhood reminisces, Jenna. A (belated) congratulations on POTD. Best always, Gershon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2022 2:05:00 AM
Thank you very much, Gershon.
Date: 10/11/2022 5:24:00 PM
Hi Jenna, I've gotten terribly behind on my reading and commenting, and have missed some wonderful creations such as this. Like you, I also had a very happy childhood filled with sweet memories, many of which were kindled by your lines here. I especially liked, "wishing our playing time outside would never end", which was a daily experience for me. I also reminisced about raising my daughter who also was a tomboy and a free spirit. Thank you for stoking the fire of many happy nostalgic moments, and congrats for your POTD acknowledgment. I'm happy to see it go to a great writer for a great poem ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2022 1:52:00 AM
How kind are your comments, John. I'm glad my lines brought back good childhood memories of your own and those with your daughter. Thanks so much for your thoughts.
Date: 10/11/2022 12:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2022 1:45:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Jeanette.
Date: 10/11/2022 12:01:00 AM
Really lovely poem, Jenna. Top choice for POTD! Elizabeth
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/12/2022 1:45:00 AM
Thank you, Elizabeth.
Date: 10/10/2022 2:57:00 PM
Jenna back again to send you A BIG CONGRATULATIONS! Receiving POTD such a wonderful honor reflective of your Childhood days reflected in memories. Enjoy your day and this wonderful Honor for your excellent Poetry...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 6:23:00 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Michael.
Date: 10/10/2022 11:06:00 AM
~ Congratulations so much on this lovely p.o.t.d., Jenna ~
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 6:21:00 PM
Thanks a lot!
Date: 10/10/2022 10:21:00 AM
Nice memories, Jenna. How lucky you were to have a little sister best friend! I always wanted one...Congrats on POTD!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 6:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Ann.
Date: 10/10/2022 10:12:00 AM
GREAT poem, Jenna--deserving of the title POTD! Janice
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 10:20:00 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks, Janice.
Date: 10/10/2022 9:11:00 AM
Jenna you were blessed to have had such a wonderful childhood, my biggest regret in life is that I didn’t. A lovely write in Tail-rhyme, congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 9:37:00 AM
Yes, I was, Belle. Thanks, an awful lot for liking my lines, and I'm so sorry that your childhood was not kind to you. ;(
Date: 10/10/2022 8:46:00 AM
Jenna, memories are beautiful and provide solace during hard times. Great poem! Congratulations on POTD~ Warren
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 9:36:00 AM
Thank you so sincerely for your kind well wishes, Warren.
Date: 10/10/2022 8:37:00 AM
Absolutely amazing!! I’m glad that you had such a wonderful childhood. Congratulations on your honor of potd!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 9:36:00 AM
Hi Mark, you know how much I appreciate your comments and your friendship. Thank you.
Date: 10/10/2022 8:16:00 AM
Superb! I return to say how pleased I am that this poem was chosen as a P.O.T.D. Congratulations, Jenna! Enjoy your day!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 9:35:00 AM
Thank you for being such a supportive friend, Milt.
Date: 10/10/2022 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honour, Jenna. Beautiful memories from childhood ..every line portrays a blissful one! The poetic form you have chosen is excellent! Love ~ Mala
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 9:34:00 AM
Thank you for your kind remarks, Mala.
Date: 10/10/2022 6:45:00 AM
Enjoyed your memories of your childhood, Jeena. Congratulations on your POTD, my friend! Enjoy your special day! Bill
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 6:46:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Bill.
Date: 10/10/2022 6:43:00 AM
Such sweet memories. I like the form you used. Congratulations on your honor of POTD Jenna. Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 6:45:00 AM
Thank you, Alice. I like the form too and found it for using in a contest that required a "T" form. I think it's one I'll use again.
Date: 10/10/2022 6:04:00 AM
Wonderful memories Jenna, Congrats on POTD
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 6:44:00 AM
Thanks very much, Joseph.
Date: 10/10/2022 5:18:00 AM
Jenna, a sweet nostalgic poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 5:55:00 AM
Morning, Tania. Thank you ever so much for your kind comments.
Date: 10/10/2022 4:48:00 AM
What an endearing write this is, Jenna! Congrats on POTD. Interesting form - tail rhyme, I must give it a try sometime
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 5:08:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your comments, Seeker. I enjoyed using the form, and you should definitely try it.
Date: 10/10/2022 2:19:00 AM
Well done jenna and a lovely poem depicting your wonderful childhood memories….Congratulations….Debx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2022 5:07:00 AM
Thanks so much for your sweet thoughts, Deb.
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