Sweet Child

Sweet little child,

      patting his,
    
              Grandfathers

back so tenderly.

Written 5-15-15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/25/2011 10:51:00 AM
Enjoyed this read today. Have a good one.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/25/2011 3:22:00 AM
James , true love at it's best!! We are so blessed to have grandchildren.It is way more than a 10 . Anne
Login to Reply
Date: 5/24/2011 10:42:00 AM
I love the image you created with your "Sweet Child" James. Best to you, Diane
Login to Reply
Date: 5/24/2011 9:23:00 AM
gentle as your pen's breezy dips, james.. love this! :) huggs , nette
Login to Reply
Date: 5/24/2011 7:41:00 AM
Lovely, so visual, in just a few words, well done~~
Login to Reply
Date: 5/23/2011 9:26:00 AM
this is so tender... enjoyed the sensitivity displayed herejames!.. :) huggs, nette
Login to Reply
Date: 5/22/2011 2:37:00 PM
Soup mail returned, James. Hope the instructions are helpful. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 5/22/2011 12:32:00 PM
this is the most touching sign of great luv between family.. hugs ..kisses ..touches... such a wonderful read on a terrific Sunday James.. enjoy that loving touch..my friend..
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2011 5:57:00 AM
Sweet, tender write, James.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2011 1:43:00 AM
very sweet indeed, james!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/20/2011 6:03:00 PM
Such love that is..Enjoyed..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 5/20/2011 4:50:00 PM
Even though I am but a young man, I feel the love of which you write in this wonderful poem. R.M.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/20/2011 3:36:00 PM
* “What A Wonderful Image & Tender Verse * Dear Gifted James * Nothing More Beautiful Than The Purity of A Childs Innocent Love * I Believe That We All Could Learn * And Thus Be Blessed * From Such Love * Beautiful * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *
Login to Reply
Date: 5/20/2011 2:39:00 PM
What a heartwarming image, James. Children can surprise us with their affection sometimes. Lovely poem. I think I would simply categorize this as "verse." Very touching. Love, carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 5/20/2011 1:42:00 PM
Lovely expressions of love, James
Login to Reply
Date: 5/20/2011 1:26:00 PM
I'm not a grandpa yet (thank God) since Christian is only 8 years old...lol but if I was, I would fully understand the love you expressed in this write. Loved it. Jeff
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter