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Sweet Breath


Lips dance,
flirt together -
romance.

Sweet breath - 
language of love
‘til death.

Hearts flared -
poetic words
declared!



By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 11/25/14,
for Nette Onclaud's Whispers of a Muse - Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/6/2014 11:33:00 PM
This is fantastic Rhonda and it directly goes to my fav, congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 12/4/2014 7:08:00 PM
Wonderfully romantic . Congrats, dearie.
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Date: 12/4/2014 4:19:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning wonderful write Rhonda!
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Date: 12/3/2014 10:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win Rhonda
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Date: 12/3/2014 7:43:00 PM
Just lovely Rhonda...congrats
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Date: 12/3/2014 7:01:00 PM
WOW! Rhonda, I love this one. A Fav for me. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/3/2014 2:59:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, such a romantic verse of love! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/3/2014 10:06:00 AM
ohh, if romance is like this, I want it, Rhonda.. so finely written.. thanks for being part of my contest with bright congrats!
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:29:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:11:00 AM
Beautifully romantic Rhonda. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/27/2014 6:45:00 PM
truly beautifully painted rhonda golden pen dear friend
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Date: 11/27/2014 9:41:00 AM
Excellent, Rhonda! This Musette flows with passion and romance. I can already see it on the winners' list! #7 // paul
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Date: 12/3/2014 10:23:00 AM
This was a winner from the word go! Congratulations, Rhonda!! // paul
Date: 11/25/2014 7:01:00 PM
Happy Thanksgiving dear! Light & Love
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:04:00 PM
yes, I agree with Jan's comments - very beautiful indeed
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Date: 11/25/2014 12:08:00 PM
beautifully penned Rhonda - I love the challenge of this short form - so few words say so much:-) Hugs Janxx good luck!
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Date: 11/25/2014 11:19:00 AM
Nicely done, good luck in the contest you have a strong entry
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Date: 11/25/2014 11:08:00 AM
Dancing, breathing, and passion . . . those are the ingredients of love and of an awesome poem . . . love the brevity of the impactful words.
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Date: 11/25/2014 8:49:00 AM
You whisper in beauteous tones.
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