Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Verse

Sweet Breath

Lips dance,
flirt together -
romance.

Sweet breath - 
language of love
‘til death.

Hearts flared -
poetic words
declared!



By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 11/25/14,
for Nette Onclaud's Whispers of a Muse - Poetry Contest

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Kayod5 Kayode December 6, 2014 at 11:33 PM This is fantastic Rhonda and it directly goes to my fav, congrats on the win...huggs

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2014 at 7:08 PM Wonderfully romantic . Congrats, dearie.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 4, 2014 at 4:19 AM Congrats on ur winning wonderful write Rhonda!

Joseph May December 3, 2014 at 10:08 PM Congrats on your win Rhonda

David Mohn December 3, 2014 at 7:43 PM Just lovely Rhonda...congrats

Maurice Yvonne December 3, 2014 at 7:01 PM WOW! Rhonda, I love this one. A Fav for me. Congratulations on your win!

Sandra Haight December 3, 2014 at 2:59 PM Hi Rhonda, such a romantic verse of love! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Nette Onclaud December 3, 2014 at 10:06 AM ohh, if romance is like this, I want it, Rhonda.. so finely written.. thanks for being part of my contest with bright congrats!

Jan Allison December 3, 2014 at 9:29 AM Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans December 3, 2014 at 9:11 AM Beautifully romantic Rhonda. Congratulations on your win.

Liam Mcdaid November 27, 2014 at 6:45 PM truly beautifully painted rhonda golden pen dear friend

Paul Callus November 27, 2014 at 9:41 AM Excellent, Rhonda! This Musette flows with passion and romance. I can already see it on the winners' list! #7 // paul Paul Callus December 3, 2014 at 10:23 AM This was a winner from the word go! Congratulations, Rhonda!! // paul

Debbie Guzzi November 25, 2014 at 7:01 PM Happy Thanksgiving dear! Light & Love

Jack Horne November 25, 2014 at 3:04 PM yes, I agree with Jan's comments - very beautiful indeed

Jan Allison November 25, 2014 at 12:08 PM beautifully penned Rhonda - I love the challenge of this short form - so few words say so much:-) Hugs Janxx good luck!

Frederic Parker November 25, 2014 at 11:19 AM Nicely done, good luck in the contest you have a strong entry

David Meade November 25, 2014 at 11:08 AM Dancing, breathing, and passion . . . those are the ingredients of love and of an awesome poem . . . love the brevity of the impactful words.

Richard Lamoureux November 25, 2014 at 8:49 AM You whisper in beauteous tones.