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Sweet Breath

Lips dance,
flirt together -
romance.

Sweet breath - 
language of love
‘til death.

Hearts flared -
poetic words
declared!



By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 11/25/14,
for Nette Onclaud's Whispers of a Muse - Poetry Contest

Copyright © Rhonda Johnson-Saunders | Year Posted 2014

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Kayod5 Kayode Date: 12/6/2014 11:33:00 PM This is fantastic Rhonda and it directly goes to my fav, congrats on the win...huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/4/2014 7:08:00 PM Wonderfully romantic . Congrats, dearie. Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/4/2014 4:19:00 AM Congrats on ur winning wonderful write Rhonda! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 12/3/2014 10:08:00 PM Congrats on your win Rhonda Login to Reply

David Mohn Date: 12/3/2014 7:43:00 PM Just lovely Rhonda...congrats Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/3/2014 7:01:00 PM WOW! Rhonda, I love this one. A Fav for me. Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 12/3/2014 2:59:00 PM Hi Rhonda, such a romantic verse of love! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/3/2014 10:06:00 AM ohh, if romance is like this, I want it, Rhonda.. so finely written.. thanks for being part of my contest with bright congrats! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 12/3/2014 9:29:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/3/2014 9:11:00 AM Beautifully romantic Rhonda. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 11/27/2014 6:45:00 PM truly beautifully painted rhonda golden pen dear friend Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 11/27/2014 9:41:00 AM Excellent, Rhonda! This Musette flows with passion and romance. I can already see it on the winners' list! #7 // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 12/3/2014 10:23:00 AM This was a winner from the word go! Congratulations, Rhonda!! // paul

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/25/2014 7:01:00 PM Happy Thanksgiving dear! Light & Love Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 11/25/2014 3:04:00 PM yes, I agree with Jan's comments - very beautiful indeed Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/25/2014 12:08:00 PM beautifully penned Rhonda - I love the challenge of this short form - so few words say so much:-) Hugs Janxx good luck! Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 11/25/2014 11:19:00 AM Nicely done, good luck in the contest you have a strong entry Login to Reply

David Meade Date: 11/25/2014 11:08:00 AM Dancing, breathing, and passion . . . those are the ingredients of love and of an awesome poem . . . love the brevity of the impactful words. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/25/2014 8:49:00 AM You whisper in beauteous tones. Login to Reply