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Sweet Autumn Wind

Rustling through the auburn, yellow and burnt orange leaves holding up my little girls first flight with her new princess kite blowing softly across my cheek and through my sand brown hair bringing with the smells of autumn the bonfires on a crisp October eve marshmallows melting chestnuts roasting fresh apple pie baking in Gram's kitchen I can hear sweet whispers tapping on my shoulder along with the children jumping in leaves playing chase, sweatshirts all strewn on the lawn grass stains on knees, dirt on their faces wouldn't have it any other way I feel the breeze begging foretelling stories, giving fair warning for harsh times are ahead when all we see when all we cherish will wither off to bed As your gentle winds drift aimlessly with grace My mind rides along soaking in the beauty of this place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/19/2015 6:09:00 PM
What a wonderful write about fall! I can smell the air in your write! Fantastic.
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Date: 9/15/2015 3:40:00 PM
Your lines appeal to our senses, Tim. The imagery is superb. There is pleasure in the air, but also a feeling that the future could hold less pleasant surprises. Top marks to you. // paul
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Date: 9/15/2015 3:03:00 PM
dazzled by your expressive lines, tim!.. thanks also for your shares on my blog.. huggs
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Date: 9/15/2015 11:18:00 AM
The imagery is spectacular! Great as always!
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Date: 9/14/2015 6:46:00 PM
Lots of beautiful fall imagery in this one. Very nice, Tim. do you think you can do the five title poem? (It was five,not six, I found out)
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Date: 9/14/2015 5:45:00 PM
Sweet autumn where are you? With your lovely portrait you made me go back to Canada and relive autumn's different shades of yellow and brown. Here in Greece still summer. I am so tired of it! Wonderful images, captivating writing, dear Tim!
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Date: 9/14/2015 11:14:00 AM
Such a beautiful place you describe..Reminds me of my childhood and kites..and makes me think of my girl and the fun we have on such autumn days..eves...Lovely.You are so good at the images you paint.
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