Sweet Are Soft Shadows

Sweet are soft shadows, preservers of life...
Removed at midday, summer's sun blazes down
  ~ Bakes the hard ground
    ~ Bludgeons tender sprouts
      ~ Burns our bare skin
        ~ Blisters parched lips
          ~ Blinds the innocent's gaze
            ~ Betrays life's precarious balance
Returned toward eventide, the essence of soft shadows
   ~ Renews the ground
    ~ Raises up the sprout
      ~ Relaxes the skin
        ~ Refreshes the lips
          ~ Revises the gaze
            ~ Restores life's balance...

Sweet are soft shadows, preservers of life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 9:32 AM
I remember when I lived in Phoenix during my "Seven Years" the sun was merciless but in the evening the shadows offered comfort - this is very profound and balanced, love it-
Wolf Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Phoenix, Whoa. That's 'bringing the heat!'... Thank you, Michelle, for your kind words and generous praise. Best always, gw
Gauthier Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 9:35 PM
Lovely poem and what a visually striking poem. Well done, Gershon.
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